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Snow, My First I laughed all the way. It was so cold. The man said, eight below with the wind. I don’t think I needed to hear that. But I was mesmerized by the reality of it. Tiny perfect flakes, fell. First on the windshield, then you stopped the car. We got out. My face to heaven, I knew… What it was to see miracles, perfect miracles… Like stars in the sky at night, Only these, Broad daylight… (Wow!), and touchable.

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Date: 11/6/2019 1:33:00 PM
Oh so nice, Ann! Well done :)
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/6/2019 2:13:00 PM
Thank you friend. Have a lovely day... Ann

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