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Snow Love




                                  feel the mountains shake

                            deep snow moans of pleasure rise

                                      freestyling in love  


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David Meade
12/13/2014
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/27/2015 7:45:00 PM
Interesting take on this love haiku, David. Only you have the unique way of such tantalizing the reader's mind with many possibilities over a few words. This is really awesome. PS. How are you these days? You are already being missed. Kim
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Date: 5/28/2015 8:27:00 AM
Hi Kim, thank-you for your sweet note. Just finished celebrating my youngest daughter's graduation . . . we had twelve people in the house for a week!! I am exhausted! Now off to work . . . but I will visit very soon. Thank-you dear friend . . . I have missed reading your poems.
Date: 3/9/2015 10:56:00 AM
David, the word snow brought me to your poem because that is what surrounds me, snow, snow, snow and you poem is lovely in every way, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:05:00 AM
Free styling that turns into an avalanche of love! Excellent, David! #7++ All the best. // paul
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:44:00 PM
- The snow came on Christmas Eve here - ( I do not like snow ..... but the kids are happy :))) - Lovely snow poem, David - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2014 5:44:00 AM
Wow...haiku-ing your love for the snow!....Impressive art work too! Be blessed this Christmas season, David. Keep Christ at the center! That's what its all about!
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Date: 12/21/2014 11:47:00 AM
Thank-you dear Gwen -- I love your work and appreciate your comments are my art work -- it actually takes me longer to do the art than the poem!! Blessings to you and your whole family == keeping Christ foremost.
Date: 12/16/2014 7:55:00 AM
enjoyed your poem david, well done. warm thoughts Ralph
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Date: 12/21/2014 11:48:00 AM
Thank=you Ralph for your visit -- I look forward to more of your works.
Date: 12/15/2014 3:20:00 PM
david truly beautiful pen pal
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David Meade
Date: 12/15/2014 7:48:00 PM
Thank-you my dear friend.
Date: 12/15/2014 12:30:00 PM
Another 7 sir, you have painted a beautiful picture of the mountain snow. Blessings and a Merry Christmas to you and your family
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:53:00 PM
Thank-you Eve, a very Merry Christmas to you and your whole family. many blessings to you.
Date: 12/15/2014 11:14:00 AM
Love the artistry in your poems. Nicely done. love phyl
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:54:00 PM
limited and crude but fun to do . . . thank-you for your visit and time, much appreciated. Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/15/2014 10:09:00 AM
Wow, David. Great Haiku.
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:55:00 PM
Thank-you my dear Cona, how all is well. Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/15/2014 8:20:00 AM
WOW! You have a fan in me. A Fav!
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:56:00 PM
Thank-you my dear friend -- the feeling is mutual, you are a positive force than make things happen and people to laugh. All the very best friend.
Date: 12/15/2014 5:39:00 AM
enchanting and beautiful David hugs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/18/2014 4:18:00 AM
the form for this is Haiku hugs
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David Meade
Date: 12/15/2014 7:57:00 PM
Thank-you dear Shadow -- you are always so nice!! Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/15/2014 4:47:00 AM
Snow's exaltation, winter's rapture! Magnificent Haiku, dear David!
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Date: 12/14/2014 10:23:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and I love the skis on your picture
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Date: 12/14/2014 8:27:00 PM
This poem is awesome David! Memorable as a vision long after it is read. I think I must Fav this one. Your last line is a real stunner!
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Date: 12/14/2014 6:58:00 PM
Love your vision of nature here fellow souper, excellent by the way just love your stick people images also, cheri by the way coo comment that you wrote for my poem the valley Auroura, cheri
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:39:00 PM
Shaking the mountains almost a new one..Way to go.,Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2014 12:08:00 PM
Wonderful poem that says so much in so few words, David! Nice metaphor for love. Also, thank you so much for stopping by my site with your positive comment! Sandra
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Date: 12/14/2014 7:11:00 AM
i love the last line.. :)! freestyle.. :)!!! and yes Live generously.. :)! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! HAppy Christmas.. :D!
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Date: 12/13/2014 8:48:00 PM
what a great way to do the theme of love in a poem about snow. awesome.
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Date: 12/13/2014 4:44:00 PM
summed up beautifully
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Date: 12/13/2014 2:58:00 PM
oh the earth moved for me when I read this David - fabulous ! Hugs Jan xxx
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