David Meade Poet Light Verse

Snow Love

feel the mountains shake

                            deep snow moans of pleasure rise

                                      freestyling in love  


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David Meade
12/13/2014
Live Generously

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Kp Nunez May 27, 2015 at 7:45 PM Interesting take on this love haiku, David. Only you have the unique way of such tantalizing the reader's mind with many possibilities over a few words. This is really awesome. PS. How are you these days? You are already being missed. Kim David Meade May 28, 2015 at 8:27 AM Hi Kim, thank-you for your sweet note. Just finished celebrating my youngest daughter's graduation . . . we had twelve people in the house for a week!! I am exhausted! Now off to work . . . but I will visit very soon. Thank-you dear friend . . . I have missed reading your poems.

Constance La France March 9, 2015 at 10:56 AM David, the word snow brought me to your poem because that is what surrounds me, snow, snow, snow and you poem is lovely in every way, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .

Paul Callus January 17, 2015 at 9:05 AM Free styling that turns into an avalanche of love! Excellent, David! #7++ All the best. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen December 27, 2014 at 12:44 PM - The snow came on Christmas Eve here - ( I do not like snow ..... but the kids are happy :))) - Lovely snow poem, David - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gwendolen Song December 20, 2014 at 5:44 AM Wow...haiku-ing your love for the snow!....Impressive art work too! Be blessed this Christmas season, David. Keep Christ at the center! That's what its all about! David Meade December 21, 2014 at 11:47 AM Thank-you dear Gwen -- I love your work and appreciate your comments are my art work -- it actually takes me longer to do the art than the poem!! Blessings to you and your whole family == keeping Christ foremost.

Ralph Mason December 16, 2014 at 7:55 AM enjoyed your poem david, well done. warm thoughts Ralph David Meade December 21, 2014 at 11:48 AM Thank=you Ralph for your visit -- I look forward to more of your works.

Liam Mcdaid December 15, 2014 at 3:20 PM david truly beautiful pen pal David Meade December 15, 2014 at 7:48 PM Thank-you my dear friend.

Eve Roper December 15, 2014 at 12:30 PM Another 7 sir, you have painted a beautiful picture of the mountain snow. Blessings and a Merry Christmas to you and your family David Meade December 15, 2014 at 7:53 PM Thank-you Eve, a very Merry Christmas to you and your whole family. many blessings to you.

Phyllis Babcock December 15, 2014 at 11:14 AM Love the artistry in your poems. Nicely done. love phyl David Meade December 15, 2014 at 7:54 PM limited and crude but fun to do . . . thank-you for your visit and time, much appreciated. Merry Christmas.

Cona Adams December 15, 2014 at 10:09 AM Wow, David. Great Haiku. David Meade December 15, 2014 at 7:55 PM Thank-you my dear Cona, how all is well. Merry Christmas.

Maurice Yvonne December 15, 2014 at 8:20 AM WOW! You have a fan in me. A Fav! David Meade December 15, 2014 at 7:56 PM Thank-you my dear friend -- the feeling is mutual, you are a positive force than make things happen and people to laugh. All the very best friend.

Shadow Hamilton December 15, 2014 at 5:39 AM enchanting and beautiful David hugs Shadow Hamilton December 18, 2014 at 4:18 AM the form for this is Haiku hugs David Meade December 15, 2014 at 7:57 PM Thank-you dear Shadow -- you are always so nice!! Merry Christmas.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 15, 2014 at 4:47 AM Snow's exaltation, winter's rapture! Magnificent Haiku, dear David!

Tim Smith December 14, 2014 at 10:23 PM Beautiful imagery and I love the skis on your picture

Connie Marcum Wong December 14, 2014 at 8:27 PM This poem is awesome David! Memorable as a vision long after it is read. I think I must Fav this one. Your last line is a real stunner!

Cherl Dunn December 14, 2014 at 6:58 PM Love your vision of nature here fellow souper, excellent by the way just love your stick people images also, cheri by the way coo comment that you wrote for my poem the valley Auroura, cheri

Sara Kendrick December 14, 2014 at 2:39 PM Shaking the mountains almost a new one..Way to go.,Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Sandra Haight December 14, 2014 at 12:08 PM Wonderful poem that says so much in so few words, David! Nice metaphor for love. Also, thank you so much for stopping by my site with your positive comment! Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 14, 2014 at 7:11 AM i love the last line.. :)! freestyle.. :)!!! and yes Live generously.. :)! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! HAppy Christmas.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich December 13, 2014 at 8:48 PM what a great way to do the theme of love in a poem about snow. awesome.

Jack Horne December 13, 2014 at 4:44 PM summed up beautifully

Jan Allison December 13, 2014 at 2:58 PM oh the earth moved for me when I read this David - fabulous ! Hugs Jan xxx