'snow Lined'

~An Haiku from my window~ an example for my contest~



                                          snow lined power lines

                                         glistening blanketed roof

                                                fire escape iced
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ramsdale Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Ice belongs on an ice-hockey rink not a fire escape 'cause firemen don't pack boots with metal blades in their gear...lol...Have another creative day filled with blessings Michael and thanks for commenting. CR
La France Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 4:00 PM
very visual, I was like there~~
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 2:46 PM
You sound as if you are in winter wonderland at the moment, while I am in Drearville!! Good example for us. LUv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Beautifully captured one, Michael. Come summer I'll miss all this pristine beauty! Always, Annalise
George   Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Vivid picture you paint in this well written Haiku, Michael. I have made the necessary changes to mine as you requested. Thank you for sponsoring the contest and for the inspiration. Elaine
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Your wish is my command luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 11:09 AM
thankxxx my W.K.and the entry for your contest has been submitted luv... hope u enjoy and much success with this beautiful theme.. Jersey Girl in football gear ..haha.. black and gold seems to suit me since it cannot be blue..luv... enjoy the game..
Devonshire Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 9:15 AM
A very vivid image of the scene outside your window, Michael. I'm thinking you live in a city apartment and are snowbound at the moment. Much different here. Enjoyed this fine example and am looking out my own window in wonder as I consider writing for your contest. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 7:59 AM
That would be a treachous escape..Great descriptive Haiku..I know that the contest will bring some great works out onto soup..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 7:23 AM
Same exact picture here Michael and u graced this page with brilliant descriptive words my White Knight... and guess what.. more for Tuesday and Thursday.. oh joy.. oh fun.. oh no.. am so done with this weather...luv.. your Jersey Girl praying for hot weather luv.. hi to fair lady ... still think Jets should be in it today..
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