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Snow Kissed Love


I put my head on my pillow and soon see you,
      Walking in the falling snow all alone, my darling;
Oh- is that our honeymoon cabin that I see,
            Where we shared such love and kisses endlessly.

When I fell in love with you, it was forever,
      Sweet the memory of us walking hand in hand;
The gentle snow falling was whispering our love,
             When I gave you my heart, it was completely.

Just like you darling, I too am lost in the snow,
      I walk a snowy winding path to your tomb;
The falling snow kissing my raven hair and tears,
             And I place a red rose and touch your name.

When I fell in love with you, it was forever,
      I will never give my heart to another, darling;
Wait for me at Heaven's gate-  I will be there soon,
            When I gave you my heart, it was completely.

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May 23, 2016

Verse

Inspiration: When I Fall In Love, by Rick Astley

For the contest, Grens Evergreens (Golden Oldies) #3
sponsor, Teppo Gren

First Place
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Day Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Romantic words - generous tones of love. Nicely penned for the contest. Congrats on your 1st place win!b - Jesse
U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Well done. Congrats! :)
Haight Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Back to congratulate you, Constance, on your well-deserved First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 8:30 AM
wow, this is amazing, Constance. A very well deserved win and congrats to you.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 7:23 AM
Congrats on your top placement! Hugs Rick.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 7:10 AM
So beautiful and sad. Congratulations, Broken Wings, on your top win! Kim x
Nau Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 12:51 AM
You already had a voice in your poetry. Now it is fun to hear who you are in your own words. Lovely tribute to a Forever love.
A  Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Broken Wings, you have a very beautiful delicate voice. I do love the feeling you gave love when falling. A perfect poem. SKAT
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Skat, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and voice, appreciate ~
Makama Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:00 PM
A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Funom, thanks for the wonderful and beautiful ~
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Oh, so beautiful, Broken Wings and your reading it intensified the feeling and sadness so much. Perfect interpretation of the words of that song. I chose that one too with another interpretation (will post soon). All the best for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful and the compliment and the 7 !!!
Richards Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 5:06 PM
I have enjoyed listening to all of your beautiful poems, READ BY YOU !!! Each one, so lovely !!! I finally gave it a try !! (I was 'chicken little'......lol !!
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Carrie, thanks so much for visiting and the compliment, I am going to visit your voice poem right now !
A  Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 6:31 PM
No Carrie don't be chicken. I'm looking forward in hearing your voice. :)
Fiery Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 10:46 PM
You sound great( like your poems)..I like the fact that I am always able to relate myself with your words....Love changes our lives forever !!! Hugs red...A7 and a fav..:)~Red
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Red, thanks for the compliment on my voice and poem, and for the 7 and fav !
Pettit Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Summer will be here soon and at least at my latitude, I will not have to worry about snow. Your poem is a very fancifully descriptive write.
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Robert, thanks for visiting, oh yes here winter is gone and we are enjoying a beautiful summer...
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