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I put my head on my pillow and soon see you, Walking in the falling snow all alone, my darling; Oh- is that our honeymoon cabin that I see, Where we shared such love and kisses endlessly. When I fell in love with you, it was forever, Sweet the memory of us walking hand in hand; The gentle snow falling was whispering our love, When I gave you my heart, it was completely. Just like you darling, I too am lost in the snow, I walk a snowy winding path to your tomb; The falling snow kissing my raven hair and tears, And I place a red rose and touch your name. When I fell in love with you, it was forever, I will never give my heart to another, darling; Wait for me at Heaven's gate- I will be there soon, When I gave you my heart, it was completely. _____________________________ May 23, 2016 Verse Inspiration: When I Fall In Love, by Rick Astley For the contest, Grens Evergreens (Golden Oldies) #3 sponsor, Teppo Gren First Place

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Date: 6/28/2016 9:19:00 PM
Romantic words - generous tones of love. Nicely penned for the contest. Congrats on your 1st place win!b - Jesse
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Date: 6/24/2016 10:29:00 AM
Well done. Congrats! :)
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Date: 6/24/2016 10:28:00 AM
Back to congratulate you, Constance, on your well-deserved First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/24/2016 8:30:00 AM
wow, this is amazing, Constance. A very well deserved win and congrats to you.
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Date: 6/24/2016 7:23:00 AM
Congrats on your top placement! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/24/2016 7:10:00 AM
So beautiful and sad. Congratulations, Broken Wings, on your top win! Kim x
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Date: 5/29/2016 5:10:00 PM
So so beautiful, for me I love a poem inspired by a song, where I think the poem is even better! :) Hugs
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Date: 5/29/2016 12:51:00 AM
You already had a voice in your poetry. Now it is fun to hear who you are in your own words. Lovely tribute to a Forever love.
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Date: 5/26/2016 6:31:00 PM
Broken Wings, you have a very beautiful delicate voice. I do love the feeling you gave love when falling. A perfect poem. SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2016 12:39:00 PM
Skat, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and voice, appreciate ~
Date: 5/26/2016 1:00:00 PM
A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:39:00 PM
Funom, thanks for the wonderful and beautiful ~
Date: 5/25/2016 6:31:00 PM
Oh, so beautiful, Broken Wings and your reading it intensified the feeling and sadness so much. Perfect interpretation of the words of that song. I chose that one too with another interpretation (will post soon). All the best for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:40:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful and the compliment and the 7 !!!
Date: 5/25/2016 5:06:00 PM
I have enjoyed listening to all of your beautiful poems, READ BY YOU !!! Each one, so lovely !!! I finally gave it a try !! (I was 'chicken little'......lol !!
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:41:00 PM
Carrie, thanks so much for visiting and the compliment, I am going to visit your voice poem right now !
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Date: 5/26/2016 6:31:00 PM
No Carrie don't be chicken. I'm looking forward in hearing your voice. :)
Date: 5/23/2016 10:46:00 PM
You sound great( like your poems)..I like the fact that I am always able to relate myself with your words....Love changes our lives forever !!! Hugs red...A7 and a fav..:)~Red
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:43:00 PM
Red, thanks for the compliment on my voice and poem, and for the 7 and fav !
Date: 5/23/2016 5:37:00 PM
Summer will be here soon and at least at my latitude, I will not have to worry about snow. Your poem is a very fancifully descriptive write.
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:44:00 PM
Robert, thanks for visiting, oh yes here winter is gone and we are enjoying a beautiful summer...

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