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Snow Is Falling

snow is falling, drifting, floating down like filigree I stand discouraged in my doorway, flower shopping bag in hand - perhaps, a cup of chamomile by the fire, warming feet _______________________ January 8, 2013 Poetry/Sijo/snow is falling Copyright Protected, ID 01-448-002-08 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/31/2013 4:37:00 PM

Constance congrats on your win. A great Sijo. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2013 11:22:00 AM

Great contrast in these winning lines..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/27/2013 5:49:00 PM

How many time have I not stood in my doorway discouraged, undecided? Nice!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 1/27/2013 9:33:00 AM

Beautiful and nice piece,Constance...Great write...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...XOXO...

Len Gasun

Date: 1/27/2013 1:12:00 AM

Awesome Sijo! Congratulation on your super win my dear Constance! love/hugs, Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2013 11:10:00 PM

A beautiful and moving entry and a great First place win! Congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2013 4:54:00 PM

Constance...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2013 3:01:00 PM

Lovely! Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2013 1:48:00 PM

I see rick agreed with me and gave you first place. YAYYYY and congrats for your well deserved win. ARe you doing ok, dear?

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/26/2013 11:26:00 AM

So melancholy and beautiful. Wonderful poem, dear heart!!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/26/2013 10:59:00 AM

Perfectly constructed Sijo, Constance...love the way you are a bit irritated by the inconvenience in the first two lines, then follow it with a peaceful warm feeling...congratulations - Tim

Thvia Shetley

Date: 1/17/2013 6:52:00 PM

hey there girl, haven't been about in a few ticks so stopping by to read and say hi! Love this little gem, best of luck in the contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/13/2013 4:09:00 PM

love this beauty, Constance - no snow here yet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2013 9:58:00 PM

Constance, how are you doing, lovely lady!! It's been a while and I happened to see you commenting on someone's poem and so I clicked on you to find this gorgeous sijo. I hope it scores really high. One of the best I have seen.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/9/2013 4:52:00 AM

Is like being there watching it happening. Wonderful writing! Thank you.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/8/2013 6:41:00 PM

Know how you feel with winter upon us. Cold and roads are closed tonight due to dangerous slippery conditions around Regina. Wonderful poem. love phyl

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/8/2013 3:56:00 PM

You have painted a picture here. Nice to read you. Love, Mehnaz

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/8/2013 3:21:00 PM

This is a fabulous and wondrous write my friend! I am amazed by the incredibly stupendous poem that you have written! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enjoyable piece this afternoon! What a impressionable poem, Great Work!!