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Snow Flakes

Snow flakes Close your eyes You see millions of snow flakes begin to fall down to our heart See? As it goes , Your sadness , anger , hatred and desperate feeling are like being covered with the flakes. Little by little Anymore , You can never see anything except for the silver snow Well ,why don't we stop hating each other and just stay together? Please forgive me We could make it for tonight Only for tonight Please see this snow fall Everything is like just being cured little by little You see much of silver snow enough to make another world We could build a castle If failed, We can do it from the beginning Since we are not alone Little by little You give me power , Your smile fulfills my heart with Joy , happiness and good feelings. And ,How happy to know that We can do this together Please stay with me We can go further more changing anything If failed, We can do it from the beginning Since we are together And Hand in hand Let's walk in the snow field Only for tonight Under the snow fall

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Date: 2/23/2016 9:13:00 PM
Masashi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:09:00 PM
MASASHI, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2013 6:21:00 AM
dynamic words, dynamic soul
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Date: 8/18/2012 1:55:00 PM
Your poem is very beautiful! It is very "Japanese", I don't know how to explain. :) The snow images, a feeling of alienation, and the hopeful fight for love, that is very Japanese. My favourite is the line: "You see much of silver snow enough to make another world". Please write more poems, I will enjoy reading! ??????????!
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