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Snow Falls Incessant Tableau

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August 17, 2023

"Tableau" contest

Sponsor: Joseph May

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Aha! Trees decked with Gleaming snow, feeder Still inviting the Chilled birds...a kind heart, A thoughtful gesture... Snow falls incessant! Picture #2 FIRST PLACE

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/12/2023 4:25:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Mala. This very special poem paints an amazing winter picture of caring and compassion. I loved it the first time I read it and loved it all over again. Blessings and a hug, dear friend!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/12/2023 4:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dearest Sam. I feel so humbled with your comment, but also delighted to have sweetest friends like you. Love and Hugs~

John Hamilton

Date: 10/12/2023 2:05:00 PM

Well said Malabika, I enjoyed this write, congrats on a nice win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/12/2023 2:28:00 PM

Thank you, Dear John. I really appreciate your kind comment.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/25/2023 11:05:00 AM

Dearest Mala, you have created a picture of caring in the midst of cold, consolation in the midst of "incessant" snow," life taking care of life when things aren't easy. This tableau has so much depth between the snowdrifts! It really touched my heart with the beauty of your caring heart! Blessings dear friend and a warm hug!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/25/2023 4:49:00 PM

Dear Sam, Thank you so much. Truly appreciate your heart-warming comment. You have such a way of inspiring others, my heart just melts. Hugs ~ Mala

Ink Empress

Date: 8/21/2023 4:12:00 AM

Congratulations i knew this is special. Well deserved

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/25/2023 4:47:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Poet. Really appreciate your inspiring comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2023 2:46:00 AM

- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Mala :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/25/2023 4:47:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. Really appreciate.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/20/2023 3:28:00 PM

Great interpretation of the picture, Mala! Lovely! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/20/2023 3:39:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Really appreciate your thoughtful comment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2023 10:05:00 AM

Still inviting a kind heart, thoughtful gesture. Congratulations, Mala! I see something of your heart here!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/20/2023 3:38:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I love watching birds - feel sad when they fly away in Fall.

Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2023 8:11:00 AM

Very nicely penned Malabika, Congrats on your win

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/20/2023 3:36:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. I feel honoured with the placement. Best wishes to you ~ Mala

Ink Empress

Date: 8/19/2023 7:31:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning , the way you’ve written in such descriptive manner. Soul warming take on the picture prompt. I can almost see what you’ve described here as its so beautifully worded.i love gleaming snow and kind heart. Exquisite write

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2023 7:35:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Poet. I am so glad you enjoyed my tableau! Same for me - love gleaming snow, and kind heart offering refuge to small animals! Truly appreciate your inspiring and sweetest words. Love ~ Mala

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 8/18/2023 11:02:00 PM

Oh, so refreshing, and truly is a sight for sore eyes, very vivid, and a welcome relief to know some places are actually cold. We live in the Sonoran Desert; it's been so intensely hot. Sigh, anyway, thank you for this lovely cheerful poem :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2023 5:48:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my page, Dear Poet. Your lovely comment truly touched my heart. I live in Canada, which is extremely cold and snowy in winter - you can easily find this sight here. Do you live in Californian part of Sonoran Desert? Many years ago, I had lived in one of the warmest countries in Middle East. My birthplace, India is pretty hot too, in summer. Best wishes to you, Mala

Suzette Richards

Date: 8/18/2023 8:28:00 PM

Bird feeders are a common sight here year-round and especially drinking water for the birds. I like your tableau, Mala. I've sent you SOUP MAIL. :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2023 2:20:00 AM

Thank you for your mail, Suzette. I will make the changes as necessary. Really appreciate your support. Love your comment for the tableau.

Silent One

Date: 8/18/2023 8:49:00 AM

You used this form so well.. You have always been very good at arranging your words in such a poetic manner... You created vivid imagery with your words..

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2023 8:55:00 AM

Ohh...Thank you so much, Silent One. I feel so fortunate to receive your inspiring comment. I am trying to improve my style by participating in the contests (not all)...you are definitely one of my silent mentors! Best wishes ~ Mala

Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2023 5:09:00 PM

Well-written verse, Mala. I've seen several today, must be for a contest. If so, good luck, my friend. Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2023 6:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, Bill. How do I thank you enough for reading my humble poems? Truly appreciate.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2023 9:05:00 AM

"Good Luck" on your lovely write/birdhouse picture. They need a heater. Have a great day.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2023 9:22:00 AM

Thanks, Paula. You are right, they need a heater. Does it snow in your place?

Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2023 8:56:00 AM

what a charming poem Malabika, I chose the same image:-) hugs Jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Jan. In Canada, this is the most common picture to me...although right now, it's lovely Summer! Your poem must be stunning!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2023 8:50:00 AM

- Lovely written, Mala ... (but, hope it's a long time until the snow comes :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2023 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise! I hope so too. Writing about snow in middle of summer - Ha Ha!