Snow Fall

Season now ends with this 
New fallen snow, like kiss
On earth, to never miss
What rain does, namely piss.

Felines are heard to hiss
At other felines - miss
Last of the snow in Liss;
Last of the sNow - oh piss!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Munn Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:55 PM
i liked it good poem....
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 12:35 PM
There seems to be a typo with the capitalization of the letter "N" in your last line, and the use of a rather insensitive word(twice), detracts from the intention of snow being pure.
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