Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Snow Deep

snow cool
   snow delightful

woke up still asleep
    stumbled to the coffee pot

walked past the window
     whaaat?!

snow deep
    snow shakes

sis in Nashville
     sis at airport

snow aware
    snow not going anywhere

shut in, steep hill, leg issues
     nevertheless enjoying the view

snow cool
      snow delightful

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Paige Hind January 11, 2025 at 12:05 PM Awww, enjoy the snow! It snowed here last night again. Sorry for your aching legs though...stay warm! <3 xxoo Kim Rodrigues January 11, 2025 at 7:58 PM Hopefully exercise will help eventually. Thank you, Paige!

Valsa George January 10, 2025 at 7:41 PM Though I haven't seen real snowfall, from your poem, I can visualize the snow lying piled up. It must be a cute sight seeing the land turn into a milky shroud. Beautifully written, Kim. Kim Rodrigues January 11, 2025 at 3:55 AM It is so beautiful, especially before footprints and tire tracks. Nothing like a bright white freshly fallen snow. Even the air is special. God bless you, sweet Valsa!

Dean Wood January 10, 2025 at 7:27 AM So cool. Snow is one of those love, hate relationships. So beautiful yet a royal pain. Enjoyed this Kim. Regards Kim Rodrigues January 10, 2025 at 11:15 AM LOL…it is all perspective! Thank you, Dean!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2025 at 6:16 AM - We have had snow all day in the new year.. today the sun is shining and the snow is sparkling... beautiful !!! - hugs Kim Rodrigues January 10, 2025 at 6:38 AM New snow is pristine, pure, perfection! One sis’ flight was cancelled so she’s headed back home.