Snow Days

Where snowflakes melt to nostalgic dreams
of candy cane wishes and white memories,
a child with red cheeks made friends with bare trees
and a mother made cocoa with mounds of whipped cream.

With glistening hillsides, sleds came out to race,
our innocence pure in fresh Christmas snow.
Then, night skies of flurries fell in starry glow
and formed constellations on fields of white lace.

Snow flurries frolic to wake long ago -
snow angels made with red scarf and shawl.
Both knitted by grandma for her little doll,
who quickly turned tomboy with packed balls of snow.

My lawn powdered white, a peaceful night scene,
conjures up magic and youth’s merriment - 
icicles, snowmen, and hours of fun spent
in a sparkling splendor of falling snow’s sheen. 

Snowflakes melt away on a little girl’s tongue.
I held my breath till my mom called snow day;
then, exhilarated called each flake to play
and dance beautifully to the wind’s carol sung.    
            

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
written 11/16/15 
For the contest, Trashed #4, Sponsor - Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/8/2015 12:57:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations, SKAT
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Date: 11/16/2015 6:02:00 PM
gosh, I don't think I saw yet another poet who showed all these different aspects of snow from a child's perspective. I agree with Jan. Shadow should be very pleased with this entry.
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Date: 11/16/2015 6:01:00 PM
gosh, thanks for what you said on my triolet writing!! that was so sweet. NOw let me read this one!
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Date: 11/16/2015 4:24:00 PM
wonderful imagery Rhonda I think Shadow will like this a lot:-) hugs jan xx
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