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Snow Acrostrain

Sleeping snow awaits to penetrate from above Niveous pillows of cloud temper the surround, Ornamental crystals waltzing within the wind Wanton; knowing when not here you’re sleeping around. © Harry J Horsman 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/14/2016 11:23:00 AM

#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations Harry.

Skat A

Date: 12/10/2015 1:18:00 PM

Harry, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/9/2015 10:46:00 PM

Very wonderful write Harry.. congrats on great win!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/5/2015 4:15:00 PM

Awesome and brilliant too. "Ornamental crystals waltzing within the wind.......sleeping around" beautifully adorned, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Len Gasun

Date: 11/3/2015 9:43:00 AM

This is absolutely an awesome acrostic poem of snow my dear friend, Harry. I enjoyed immensely the read and the ending quite pinched my heart. Thank you so much for sharing and the vicarious experiences from it. Thank you so much as well (belated) for sharing some of your precious time reading one of my latest poems. God bless you. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Emile Pinet

Date: 11/2/2015 10:16:00 AM

Nice flow of words attracting the reader with their simplistic beauty, resulting in a pleasant sounding poem with a sad undertone. Emile.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/29/2015 10:05:00 PM

Love this great acrostic with the ending twist. pm on the way my friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/29/2015 11:25:00 AM

love the spontaneous flow of this write.. so vivid, harry.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2015 6:29:00 PM

ooh, that last line is very clever, Harry. And I love the waltzing wind!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/28/2015 7:31:00 AM

I like your first line mmmmn sleeping snow, and more the 2nd, such an imagery and wow in 3rd line!!!! the last line really caps it all!~Olive Eloisa