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Snow Acrostrain

Sleeping snow awaits to penetrate from above
Niveous pillows of cloud temper the surround,
Ornamental crystals waltzing within the wind
Wanton; knowing when not here you’re sleeping around.

© Harry J Horsman 2015

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Funom Makama Date: 1/14/2016 11:23:00 AM #7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant Login to Reply

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 12/11/2015 9:50:00 AM Congratulations Harry. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/10/2015 1:18:00 PM Harry, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT* Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/9/2015 10:46:00 PM Very wonderful write Harry.. congrats on great win! Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 11/5/2015 4:15:00 PM Awesome and brilliant too. "Ornamental crystals waltzing within the wind.......sleeping around" beautifully adorned, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 11/3/2015 9:43:00 AM This is absolutely an awesome acrostic poem of snow my dear friend, Harry. I enjoyed immensely the read and the ending quite pinched my heart. Thank you so much for sharing and the vicarious experiences from it. Thank you so much as well (belated) for sharing some of your precious time reading one of my latest poems. God bless you. love lots and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 11/2/2015 10:16:00 AM Nice flow of words attracting the reader with their simplistic beauty, resulting in a pleasant sounding poem with a sad undertone. Emile. Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 10/29/2015 10:05:00 PM Love this great acrostic with the ending twist. pm on the way my friend. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/29/2015 11:25:00 AM love the spontaneous flow of this write.. so vivid, harry.. huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/28/2015 6:29:00 PM ooh, that last line is very clever, Harry. And I love the waltzing wind!! Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/28/2015 7:31:00 AM I like your first line mmmmn sleeping snow, and more the 2nd, such an imagery and wow in 3rd line!!!! the last line really caps it all!~Olive Eloisa Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/28/2015 12:55:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. The last line is all the more powerful and beautiful Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 10/27/2015 8:56:00 PM Harry, nice and soothing and then the ending cuts like a knife, wonderful ~ Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 10/27/2015 6:25:00 AM Simply stunning write! The last line is all the more powerful because it is so unexpected. Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 10/26/2015 7:07:00 AM Beautiful mate, just plain beautiful. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/26/2015 12:20:00 AM Harry, I love the third line. Better yet, I enjoy the imagery of sleeping snow. Always... LINDA Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 10/25/2015 9:12:00 PM Nicely penned! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/25/2015 8:34:00 AM Quite the surprising and chilling finish! I guess even though she is cold hearted she is not frigid. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 10/25/2015 3:32:00 AM good last line harry comes as a surprise xx Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/24/2015 10:38:00 AM OH...that last line was a finish I didn't expect at all. Interesting write, Harry. Good luck in the contest. Hope all is well. Login to Reply