Snow

Snuggled and hunkered down in winter clothes Nestled warm in a winter wonderland Only parts in sight are their eyes and nose Wee ones out to play who can barely stand

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John Lawless

Date: 12/13/2015 4:41:00 PM

Yup!! Just stand them in the snow...and watch them topple....Good one....

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest CayCay.

Skat A

Date: 12/10/2015 12:53:00 PM

CayCay, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Eve Roper

Date: 12/9/2015 10:36:00 PM

Great write, Cay Cay, congratulations on you top win!!!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/9/2015 10:26:00 PM

Yet another lovely write n top place win dear Caycay.. big congrats!

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/29/2015 11:26:00 AM

Cute! This will surely appeal to Jan. Love the image and the fun way you wrote this. hugs!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 11/4/2015 5:20:00 PM

And a hug and thank you to you, dear one ... CayCay

Anna Hopper

Date: 10/28/2015 6:08:00 AM

Nice little image in my mind.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 11/4/2015 5:19:00 PM

Thank you, Anna - CayCay

Michael Tor

Date: 10/27/2015 1:31:00 PM

CayCay the imagery is wonderful.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/27/2015 2:05:00 PM

I am so glad you liked it, Michael - Thank you, CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2015 8:28:00 AM

I remember being bundled in those old snow suits and being barely able to move.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/27/2015 8:39:00 AM

Me, too. And how important wearing every single article was to my Mother. Bending and running just didn't happen! ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2015 6:16:00 AM

Oh, Caycay, I had assumed that I'd already seen yours. I've seen others on snow and I enjoy this one a lot too. yes, you used perfect rhyme and syllable count here! Did you ever see the movie "A Christmas Story?" This reminds me of that kid that was all hunkered down in his winter clothes and he would fall down in the snow and couldn't get back up! cute one!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/27/2015 7:42:00 AM

Yes, I pictured my son, but now that you mention it, I do recall that scene! It was hysterical. The whole movie was funny - The Leg Lamp! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment ... CayCay

Mark Woods

Date: 10/27/2015 4:13:00 AM

It can be such a fun time of year for the littlies. And don't they look so fantastic when they are all rugged up.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/27/2015 4:28:00 AM

And have trouble walking! Yes, they are precious, but sometimes we take longer preparing them than they do staying out! I love the mental image of my little boy, bundled up in the snow. Maybe it is so clear because snow is rare in Texas. Good to see you ... CayCay