Eddee Shaz Poet Etheree

Snow

snow
its cold
I hate it
numbing my face
I can hardly talk
freezing my  hands and feet
I hate the cold winter nights
when I'm all alone and thinking
will these cold winter days ever end?
I hope that spring will come a bit early

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Nette Onclaud January 27, 2011 at 12:10 AM getting giddy for spring with this expressive write, eddee... :) superb! hugggs, nette

Eddee Shaz January 26, 2011 at 8:52 PM it was there I just forgot it oops Brain cells running all together makes for stormy weather inside your head Thanks es

Robert Pettit January 26, 2011 at 8:47 PM A nice write here. However, where is your three syllable line? A suggestion: how about adding "As it falls" for your three syllable line?

I Dream In Poetry January 26, 2011 at 8:45 PM I too am tired of snow! Nice poem:)