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a frosted farmhouse-- smoke blends silently into the dark clouds first winter storm-- tire tracks fill quickly along the old dirt road snow blows sideways-- north winds rattle a window a flashlight glitters-- cattle are herded into the barn laden with snow the trees succumb and bend-- a farmer prays over supper embers burn low-- the fields have white blankets for a frigid night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/5/2010 10:50:00 AM
wonderful set that flows one into the other, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:21:00 AM
delighted with your warard here, carrie.. all the best... nette
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:58:00 AM
congrats Carrie on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/3/2010 6:10:00 AM
Good one..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:17:00 PM
well done Carrie..congrats!!!!
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Date: 12/2/2010 9:44:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your awesome win, love Wilma
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your awesome entry. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:53:00 AM
Lovely imagery in all of these lovely haiku, congrats on your win with these!
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:26:00 AM
Carrie) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:35:00 AM
Many congratulations dear Carrie for this awesome win.
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:59:00 AM
Congrats Carrie, great write! Blessings Joy (Jew)
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:56:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win Carrie in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2010 1:02:00 AM
a big congrats to you, carrie! love it..:) nette
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Date: 12/1/2010 11:08:00 PM
Very nice carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2010 10:21:00 PM
brr- you sure brought such wintry images here and I really enjoyed how you put a bit of light towards the end, Carrie :) Congrats on your wonderful win! hugs-- nikko :)
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Date: 12/1/2010 9:15:00 PM
Carrie, these are just beautiful images for the season, especially the fields having white blankets. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win, Carrie. VEry well deserved as always. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:34:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your second place win in the Snow contest with this super write.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:30:00 PM
Carrie, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT
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Date: 11/30/2010 8:13:00 AM
i love those white blankets. .and the humble life of a blessed farmer's family who love their soil,i yearn for that simple life..beautiful.
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Date: 11/28/2010 12:40:00 PM
What a vivid picture you paint of snow on the farm, Carrie. Each verse is outstanding! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/28/2010 5:35:00 AM
A beautiful scene and picture we can all jump into...well written my dear poet friend....luv Michael
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:10:00 AM
carrie, you did some lovely haiku here. These have GOT to score high! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:26:00 PM
I love each one..outstanding. BG
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