Snow

the fun snow was cold 
snow family we did build 
hot chocolate time 

 

Date Written:12/29/2022 

5 Place

Ice, Snow or Frost Haiku Contest 
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Len Gasun

Date: 1/7/2023 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win my dear friend Paula. I can see the panoramic image of the winter in your poem. I love the snow family you built and the hot choco time gives warm to the season. Thank you so much for sharing! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/8/2023 8:17:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun snow win. I enjoyed writing it. Hot chocolate is great anytime day/night. Have a blessed day/week writing away.................

Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2023 5:09:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Did like the hot chocolate. Many blessings to you

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/6/2023 9:27:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Hot chocolate makes any day/night better. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

John Lawless

Date: 1/5/2023 9:38:00 AM

I once helped the kids to build an "Igloo" and we had hot chocolate and cookies inside. thanks for bringing back that day for me....

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/5/2023 10:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Sounds like your "Igloo," hot chocolate/cookies was a ton of fun. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/5/2023 3:31:00 AM

Paula, sweet imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/5/2023 6:47:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your fun contest. I enjoyed writing this Haiku one. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/30/2022 10:24:00 PM

Kim and I will be at your house later today for that hot chocolate!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 7:33:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Hot chocolate for 3 coming up. Cookies tooooooo. Hooray!!! Happy New Year 2023.......................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/30/2022 8:19:00 PM

Yay for hot chocolate time!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 7:32:00 AM

Thanks for your note. A cup of hot chocolate is good with/without snow. Hooray!!! A cup or two???Happy New Year 2023.......................

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/30/2022 3:47:00 PM

In the end all we have left of them fun days building snow families, are indeed warm memories, I bet you enjoyed that cuppa Paula, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 7:29:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Yes, in life all we have are great memories. A cup of hot chocolate is good with or without snow. Hooray!!! Happy New Year 2023.......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2022 2:12:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. I hope your New Year is awesome. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 7:26:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Snow" write. Tonight is no big deal. Peaceful. Have a great time tonight. Happy New Year 2023....................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/30/2022 1:59:00 PM

Fun time with family. Lovely haiku, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 7:23:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun time write with family/friends. Happy New Year 2023...................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2022 6:51:00 PM

How fun and how nice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2022 6:29:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Yes, snow and hot chocolate are fun/nice and go together. Happy New Year 2023 with Hugs......................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/29/2022 5:07:00 PM

Your lovely haiku creates such a happy mood, Paula. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2022 6:27:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my Haiku "Snow" write. Happy New Year 2023 with Hugs......................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/29/2022 1:59:00 PM

snow and hot chocolate - nothing like it! Warm wishes ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2022 6:22:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your warm wishes. The snow and hot chocolate go together. Hooray!!! Happy New Year 2023 with Hugs......................