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Snow

wind chills dip harsh freeze
branches snapping under snow~
stag stands frozen still

12/29/2022


Ice, Snow Or Frost Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Michelle Faulkner

January 8, 2023 at 5:04 PM

You have caught the quiet beauty of snow so aptly, love the image of the stag too~

Len Gasun

January 7, 2023 at 5:12 PM

I can see the panoramic view of the winter through your beautiful words my dear friend Eve! Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you and your writings my dear friend. Hugs

Sam Kauffman

January 6, 2023 at 10:26 AM

Eve, my friend, your haiku overflows with a vibrant snapshot of a moment in winter! Wonderful. Congratulations on your win!!! Blessings of joy, grace and peace to you!

Caren Krutsinger

January 5, 2023 at 9:08 PM

ah, so snappy and spot on!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 5, 2023 at 7:01 PM

I love the vibrancy of this winter scene, Eve. Congratulations on your win. My very best wishes, Evelyn :)

Valsa George

January 5, 2023 at 5:06 PM

So sad is the plight of the stag. Shows the intensity of the snow. Great haiku. Congratulations Eve

Paula Goldsmith

January 5, 2023 at 9:54 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write/picture. I can feel the cold wind. Your friend needs a sweater. Hahaha...... Have a blessed day writing away...............

Tania Kitchin

January 4, 2023 at 4:47 PM

Eve, love the imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

James Marshall Goff

December 30, 2022 at 8:23 AM

Cool poem Eve...was missing the wise poetry of your sister Lucilla this morning, so I read some of her poems....I get a bit melancholy around the new year... missing old friends & such...

Eve Roper

December 30, 2022 at 4:04 PM

James, thank you for the visit. I know the feeling of being melancholy during the holidays. Lucy passing has been a while and my thoughts are with her every so often. Many blessings my friend

Beata Agustin

December 30, 2022 at 6:50 AM

Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

December 29, 2022 at 6:50 PM

Very well described, Eve and thanks so much for all your inspiring contests this year.

Mystic Rose Rose

December 29, 2022 at 5:48 PM

Unsurmountable beauty Eve, Love you, stay strong :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 29, 2022 at 1:47 PM

- What a beautiful haiku poem, Eve - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

December 29, 2022 at 9:07 AM

Beautifully crafted haiku, Eve. You conveyed a great winter scene. Thanks for my contest placement. I'm hoping you had a wonderful time celebrating the holidays. I hope that 2023 treats you well.

Chris Green

December 29, 2022 at 7:20 AM

Beautifully written Eve. The winter scene you create with your words brings a wonderful chill to me. Happy Holidays my friend. Best wishes in the contest