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snore she,s in bed sleeping she,s in a room of four she told me in fun one day how the others around her snore and she just smiles as she described it all she likes to call it her little adventure in the hospital so then i said to her to make her smile a little more from all the way in america i can hear you snore her eyes lights up and she starts to laugh as the nurse close the window because she felt a little draft if we all just be kind to everyone we meet just imagine how wonderful it will be to take a simple walk down the street i am lucky to meet some kind people and will thank them for ever more so i wish them all a very good night sweet dreams and have a very good snore she is resting at home now but she still has a lot of pain the surgery was a success and in time she will be well again and the doctors told her don't push yourself no more and make sure to get plenty of rest and as she falls asleep she starts to snore the next day when she talks to me she said i snore a lot last night i said omg that was you i thought it was a ufo ship in flight i like to make her smile she is my best friend and she will always be until the very end so it's time to end this poem someone's knocking at my door so good night you all sweet dreams and have a good snore

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Date: 7/8/2012 11:59:00 AM
snore,snore for ever more,don,t leave it at home take snore on tour,lol,great write Kasim,love your poetry
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Kasim Ishmael
Date: 7/8/2012 12:14:00 PM
my friend thank you
Date: 7/8/2012 11:38:00 AM
THis is SO cute. I love it!! and now I am changing my mind. It sounds like you are in the US.
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Kasim Ishmael
Date: 7/8/2012 11:59:00 AM
my friend thank you and yes i live in the usa

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