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Snooker Mad

Hendry says that Ronnie, The best to pick up a cue. He's never seen me play So that might not be true. I had a break of twenty When I was just a lad, I'm getting on for sixty now So a forty ain't so bad. So come on then O'Sullivan I challenge you to play, I will give you a game for twenty quid And you can pick the day. I know you are a great player, I watch you all the time. You can make that cue ball sing But I can make it rhyme. A Strand (1071) Sponsored by Brian strand

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Date: 11/8/2023 10:39:00 AM
I loved all your poems. I liked the flow and the ease of the rhythm. Some were even funny.
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Simon Hamill
Date: 11/8/2023 2:04:00 PM
Hi, glad you liked them. I try to mix them up.we can't be serious all the time.lol. take care.
Date: 7/9/2023 7:13:00 PM
Love the confidence and the rhymes. The ending was sublime.
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Date: 7/15/2023 5:34:00 PM
hi James. if only I was as good as Ronnie lol. i still only play for one £1 that`s only thing that`s not gone up with inflation. thanks for the comment, cheers, simon :-)
Date: 12/15/2020 1:32:00 PM
Great ending for the poem Simon. Loved it.
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Simon Hamill
Date: 12/15/2020 5:08:00 PM
Thank you.i enjoyed writing that one.have a great Christmas.simon.:)
Date: 12/8/2020 9:36:00 AM
Really well done, Simon, esp. the last two lines. Brilliant! ... And I think that a poem on billiards is a first (!) on the Soup. ~ Cheers, Gershon
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Simon Hamill
Date: 12/8/2020 11:40:00 AM
I've had a break of 67.im just snooker mad.my mate told me to send it to snooker championship for them to read out.lol.cheers Gershon.
Date: 12/6/2020 1:42:00 PM
He won't beat you on the rhyme Simon, tried playing snooker a few times myself in the past but I was just useless at it lol, Emilia : ) hope you are keeping well.
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Simon Hamill
Date: 12/8/2020 5:33:00 PM
Hi emilia.i love snooker,but I'm not that good lol.text soon.simon:)

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