Snip Snip

UNSUPPORTED CODE Take the threads of my being.
weave them
wind them around and
entwine love in those knots
then snip snip
seize them apart
before the poison seeps in 
before the time takes away
what is sweet and what is mine UNSUPPORTED CODE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:06 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:37 AM
maha mahmood, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 10:02 PM
MAHA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
McBride  Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 11:18 PM
welcome enjoyed your write
Orozco Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 9:05 AM
Welcome to the soup! Very interesting piece here hope to read more :) - ed
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 12:41 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Maha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Russell-Lewis Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Interesting poem
Guzzi Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 4:16 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Maha, you'll find a friendly group of folks here! One heck of an entry write there. They don't let us use art in the verse [sigh] If you put this in 7 lines, I'd love to have it in my contest. If you are a non-premium member please make a note at the bottom of the poem. directions are in my blog. Light & Love
A  Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Maha, , stopping by 2 welcome U into the soup. First I will start by reading your blank verse. love the snipping image. lol.......Good verse if you ask me. Wishing you the best success with your poetry. ~SKAT~
Shines Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 6:08 AM
good write
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