Snip Snip

UNSUPPORTED CODE Take the threads of my being. weave them wind them around and entwine love in those knots then snip snip seize them apart before the poison seeps in before the time takes away what is sweet and what is mine UNSUPPORTED CODE

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/8/2024 11:06:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 12:37:00 AM

maha mahmood, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 10:02:00 PM

MAHA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Stephan McBride

Date: 12/14/2012 11:18:00 PM

welcome enjoyed your write

Edward Orozco

Date: 12/11/2012 9:05:00 AM

Welcome to the soup! Very interesting piece here hope to read more :) - ed

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 12:41:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Maha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Ornella Russell-Lewis

Date: 12/6/2012 11:16:00 AM

Interesting poem

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/5/2012 4:16:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Maha, you'll find a friendly group of folks here! One heck of an entry write there. They don't let us use art in the verse [sigh] If you put this in 7 lines, I'd love to have it in my contest. If you are a non-premium member please make a note at the bottom of the poem. directions are in my blog. Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 12/4/2012 1:06:00 PM

Maha, , stopping by 2 welcome U into the soup. First I will start by reading your blank verse. love the snipping image. lol.......Good verse if you ask me. Wishing you the best success with your poetry. ~SKAT~

Kenisha Shines

Date: 12/3/2012 6:08:00 AM

good write