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Snickers Senryu 1

the dog is gagging

in some vomit on the floor. . . 

my vanished earring


(well, it's kind of about nature; a very natural thing for dogs. haha!)
For PD's (Make Me Chuckle with a haiku) Haiku #1 (or senryu)

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Skat A

July 31, 2015 at 1:28 PM

Andrea, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Bl Devnath

July 31, 2015 at 11:51 AM

Congrats on your win my lovely beautiful friend. After reading this beautiful poem i felt that perhaps the dog tried to keep your ring safe in its belly even after gagging but vomited. Ha ha ha..... Loved always,bl

Lee Carter

July 31, 2015 at 8:21 AM

Congrats on your chuckle win Andrea! ~lee

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 30, 2015 at 10:41 PM

Ah the wit wins Andrea! Congrats on ur win!

Alexis Y.

July 30, 2015 at 8:59 PM

Hi Andrea, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

July 30, 2015 at 5:28 PM

Poor doggie I hope it didn't hurt his stomach coming back. Love the write congratulations on the win hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick

July 30, 2015 at 5:28 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Did you wear that earring again?Sara

Jan Allison

July 30, 2015 at 3:09 PM

At least it didn't come out the other end Andrea lol - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

July 30, 2015 at 2:41 PM

LOL, Andrea... ewwww! :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~

Phyllis Babcock

June 18, 2015 at 4:47 PM

Here I was thinking chocolate lol. Cute one. love phyl

Bl Devnath

March 14, 2015 at 10:07 AM

Yes, the dogs do generally, nicely penned. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Wilma Neels

March 13, 2015 at 2:02 PM

Hehehe they sure don't care what they eat Andrea ;)

Joseph May

March 11, 2015 at 10:00 PM

They'll eat just about anything....best wishes

Paul Callus

March 11, 2015 at 10:57 AM

Got a chuckle out of it, so aim achieved! Hope you kept the other earring:) // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

March 10, 2015 at 11:55 PM

Yes, they sure will gobble up anything. Good one Andrea!

Joe Maverick

March 10, 2015 at 3:22 PM

I got to hand it to ya Andrea, this is as real to life as you're gonna get...' Its goo..goo..Good wheew that you didn't add Any more detail though..' best wishes for that contest..'

Viv Wigley

March 10, 2015 at 12:06 PM

A jewel in a pool of drool..... being a cat owner, I've not had to suffer this yet. Good verse. Viv x

Sara Kendrick

March 10, 2015 at 8:49 AM

Wellllllll!!!! It doesn't make me laugh just turns my stomach..Ha!! Ha!!..My father used to say that the only thing that could turn his stomach was to hang a butterbean on a string behind him and his stomach would turn around to get the butterbean..I am not so strong stomached..Thanks for stopping by..Oh!! This one reads like a winner..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 9, 2015 at 8:29 PM

Anyone with a dog has a gross story like this. It's so funny, but poor snickers. He could have been hurt if he hadn't puked it up...to answer your question, yep I think I have ten, but my husband accidentally downloaded a virus on our computer. I'm completely shut down so I have no way to get them all together. I'm stuck using my tablet till it's fixed...soon I hope.