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Snickers Senryu 1

the dog is gagging

in some vomit on the floor. . . 

my vanished earring


(well, it's kind of about nature; a very natural thing for dogs. haha!)
For PD's (Make Me Chuckle with a haiku) Haiku #1 (or senryu)

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Skat A

Date: 7/31/2015 1:28:00 PM

Andrea, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/31/2015 11:51:00 AM

Congrats on your win my lovely beautiful friend. After reading this beautiful poem i felt that perhaps the dog tried to keep your ring safe in its belly even after gagging but vomited. Ha ha ha..... Loved always,bl

Lee Carter

Date: 7/31/2015 8:21:00 AM

Congrats on your chuckle win Andrea! ~lee

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 10:41:00 PM

Ah the wit wins Andrea! Congrats on ur win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/30/2015 8:59:00 PM

Hi Andrea, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2015 5:28:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Did you wear that earring again?Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 7/30/2015 5:28:00 PM

Poor doggie I hope it didn't hurt his stomach coming back. Love the write congratulations on the win hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 7/30/2015 3:09:00 PM

At least it didn't come out the other end Andrea lol - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:41:00 PM

LOL, Andrea... ewwww! :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/18/2015 4:47:00 PM

Here I was thinking chocolate lol. Cute one. love phyl

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/14/2015 10:07:00 AM

Yes, the dogs do generally, nicely penned. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/13/2015 2:02:00 PM

Hehehe they sure don't care what they eat Andrea ;)

Joseph May

Date: 3/11/2015 10:00:00 PM

They'll eat just about anything....best wishes

Paul Callus

Date: 3/11/2015 10:57:00 AM

Got a chuckle out of it, so aim achieved! Hope you kept the other earring:) // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/10/2015 11:55:00 PM

Yes, they sure will gobble up anything. Good one Andrea!

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/10/2015 3:22:00 PM

I got to hand it to ya Andrea, this is as real to life as you're gonna get...' Its goo..goo..Good wheew that you didn't add Any more detail though..' best wishes for that contest..'

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/10/2015 12:06:00 PM

A jewel in a pool of drool..... being a cat owner, I've not had to suffer this yet. Good verse. Viv x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2015 8:49:00 AM

Wellllllll!!!! It doesn't make me laugh just turns my stomach..Ha!! Ha!!..My father used to say that the only thing that could turn his stomach was to hang a butterbean on a string behind him and his stomach would turn around to get the butterbean..I am not so strong stomached..Thanks for stopping by..Oh!! This one reads like a winner..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/9/2015 8:29:00 PM

Anyone with a dog has a gross story like this. It's so funny, but poor snickers. He could have been hurt if he hadn't puked it up...to answer your question, yep I think I have ten, but my husband accidentally downloaded a virus on our computer. I'm completely shut down so I have no way to get them all together. I'm stuck using my tablet till it's fixed...soon I hope.