Sneezing

This is some ramblings of a poet which probably make no sense
After gallbladder surgery don't sneeze
It doesn't matter if they only poke four holes in your side
     And one incision in the belly button
The pain is so bad that you will try to stop the sneeze, have a minor accident
   Cry and pass out all in the same breathe 
Then discovering that you are being effected by six sneezes simultaneously
   The prayers begin and the hopes that other Christian friends 
are remembering you at the same time 

Thank God that he hears and answers prayers for I made it through to the other side
     of the surgery and the sneezes and the one week after surgery..

The pain has been really bad as has been the nausea and shivering, yes, shivering 
occurs from having gallbladder surgery..There is a medicine that they give to help 
counteract the effect..It helps but still there is some shivering..

Thanks to each one who has prayed, sent a note, read my poems even when they were not very good..God bless each one..

 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/21/2014 6:09:00 PM
Dear Sara - Hope you are feeling better. Sounds like maybe you are past the worst part by now? Surgery is never fun, but isn't it wonderful for all that it can do for you once it is over with and you have recovered? Thanks for stopping by to ready my Ink Blot poem. Glad you got a laugh out of it. - Gail
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:25:00 AM
Let's hope our prayers are answered and that you feel just great again soon, my friend. Thanks very much for the win in your contest - had a lot of fun with that : )
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Date: 9/29/2014 9:26:00 AM
Chin up Sara; surgery and sneezing have never been on good terms, but in a week's time you will be feeling much better:) Take care. // paul
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Date: 9/29/2014 9:26:00 AM
I pray and wish speedy recovery from the pain you have undergone, Sara
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Date: 9/29/2014 8:37:00 AM
God bless you more and take care of you, Sara.
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