Sneeze

Everywhere I look, you’re there
Settled on the picture frame
Resting atop the door jam
Spinning on the ceiling fan
Having fun? 
Ahhh-chooo !

Every week I look, you’re there
Clouding the glass surfaces
Clogging up the air filters
Settling on the carpet
Having fun?
Ahhh-chooo!!

Every time I clean, you’re there
Clinging to the TV screen
Filling in the tables creases
Dancing in sunrays
Having fun?
Ahhh-chooo!!!

Everywhere I go, you’re there
Coating leaves and trees
Even simple weeds aren’t spared
Freely floating in the breeze
Having fun?
Ahhh-chooo!!!!

Every day I breathe, you’re there
Persistence and consistent
You’re always there to make me sneeze 
But never say, God bless you!
Having fun?
Ahhh-chooo!!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 24, 2013 at 11:11 AM
Hi Debra, have not seen you around. Hope you are fine!... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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November 22, 2013 at 12:06 PM
Debra , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~
Merryman Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 1:06 PM
Debra, congrats on your win with this cute, humorous write! Love, Kim
Taylor Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Congrats, Debra. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
A   Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 7:37 PM
Debra. thank you for the nice and simple smile :-) "CONGRATULATIONS!" and goodnight xox...PD
Mehta Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Very funny and humorous expressions with nice personification, Debra
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 11:33 AM
:):):) i love it when you write these fun ones. grab a snifter and a swiffer and take it to these little ones. we'll see who gets the last laugh when your done. Ahh Choo!
Neels Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Oh my word, I absolutely love this Debra, reminds me of myself at times.. I tend to say God bless me to myself whenever I sneeze and no one is around :) enjoyed this loads, hope your day will be a great one
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May 1, 2011 at 9:36 AM
This makes me think of my husband for he sneezes A LOT! Which gets on my nerves LOL! Enjoyed reading very much though x
A   Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Lol. I can only imagine dust particles... following my every move... funny poem... Debra,... have a wonderful blessed day... p.d.
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