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Sneeze

Everywhere I look, you’re there Settled on the picture frame Resting atop the door jam Spinning on the ceiling fan Having fun? Ahhh-chooo ! Every week I look, you’re there Clouding the glass surfaces Clogging up the air filters Settling on the carpet Having fun? Ahhh-chooo!! Every time I clean, you’re there Clinging to the TV screen Filling in the tables creases Dancing in sunrays Having fun? Ahhh-chooo!!! Everywhere I go, you’re there Coating leaves and trees Even simple weeds aren’t spared Freely floating in the breeze Having fun? Ahhh-chooo!!!! Every day I breathe, you’re there Persistence and consistent You’re always there to make me sneeze But never say, God bless you! Having fun? Ahhh-chooo!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/24/2013 11:11:00 AM
Hi Debra, have not seen you around. Hope you are fine!... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:06:00 PM
Debra , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/18/2013 1:06:00 PM
Debra, congrats on your win with this cute, humorous write! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/13/2013 8:07:00 PM
Congrats, Debra. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/9/2013 7:37:00 PM
Debra. thank you for the nice and simple smile :-) "CONGRATULATIONS!" and goodnight xox...PD
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Date: 5/8/2011 9:01:00 AM
Very funny and humorous expressions with nice personification, Debra
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Date: 5/2/2011 11:33:00 AM
:):):) i love it when you write these fun ones. grab a snifter and a swiffer and take it to these little ones. we'll see who gets the last laugh when your done. Ahh Choo!
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Date: 5/1/2011 11:53:00 AM
Oh my word, I absolutely love this Debra, reminds me of myself at times.. I tend to say God bless me to myself whenever I sneeze and no one is around :) enjoyed this loads, hope your day will be a great one
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Date: 5/1/2011 9:36:00 AM
This makes me think of my husband for he sneezes A LOT! Which gets on my nerves LOL! Enjoyed reading very much though x
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Date: 5/1/2011 8:57:00 AM
Lol. I can only imagine dust particles... following my every move... funny poem... Debra,... have a wonderful blessed day... p.d.
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