Sneaking a Peek

As I drew closer to the bedroom door,
through keyhole I peeked as I knelt on the floor.
And there she lay on a bed soft as clouds,
with barely a shadow to act as a shroud.

Quietly I crept while she peacefully slept,
a picture of beauty, I took and I kept.
I was sure not to wake her, I would not dare,
from her wonderful dreams, never to tear.

I wondered what dream she would choose to keep,
a token taken from a sleep so deep.
To interrupt my heart would not allow,
just nearing and peering like circling fowl.

Suddenly I touched her, I could not resist,
she awoke startled, clawed me and hissed.
Then Fluffy the cat scurried under the bed
and I had to snuggle with a pillow instead.



1/1/19
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Sands Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
Rushing Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Thank you Heidi have wonderful evening my friend!
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February 17, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Back with a resounding bravo on your win, Wren.
Rushing Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Thank you so much Line, you are a great friend!
Agustin Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Rushing Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Thank you Beata, have wonderful evening!
Awtry Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Back with congratulations, Wren! This was so well written and great fun too :) has
Rushing Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Thank you P.S.
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 4:16 PM
What a fun turn, Wren. Surprise! Congrats on your well deserved win.
Rushing Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 6:00 PM
Thank you Line!
Proxenos Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 6:42 AM
Such a lovely,clever and cute poem! perfectly rhymed and rhythmic flow, and Fluffy the cat at the end was the cutest surprise. Well done Wren, Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Rushing Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 9:07 AM
Thank you Jennifer for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend my friend!
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Well written, Wren..ending was a surprise as you had me believing otherwise. Best for a win.
Rushing Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Thank you Vijay!
Awtry Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 10:42 PM
o my I am laughing at the naughty things I could say... Enjoyed this poem very much! Good luck in the contest :)
Rushing Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Thank you P.S.!
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