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Sneaking a Peek

As I drew closer to the bedroom door, through keyhole I peeked as I knelt on the floor. And there she lay on a bed soft as clouds, with barely a shadow to act as a shroud. Quietly I crept while she peacefully slept, a picture of beauty, I took and I kept. I was sure not to wake her, I would not dare, from her wonderful dreams, never to tear. I wondered what dream she would choose to keep, a token taken from a sleep so deep. To interrupt my heart would not allow, just nearing and peering like circling fowl. Suddenly I touched her, I could not resist, she awoke startled, clawed me and hissed. Then Fluffy the cat scurried under the bed and I had to snuggle with a pillow instead. 1/1/19

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Date: 2/17/2019 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/19/2019 5:58:00 PM
Thank you Heidi have wonderful evening my friend!
Date: 2/17/2019 8:17:00 AM
Back with a resounding bravo on your win, Wren.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/19/2019 5:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, you are a great friend!
Date: 2/13/2019 9:11:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/15/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Beata, have wonderful evening!
Date: 2/13/2019 7:31:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Wren! This was so well written and great fun too :) has
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/15/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thank you P.S.
Date: 2/13/2019 4:16:00 PM
What a fun turn, Wren. Surprise! Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/13/2019 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Line!
Date: 1/19/2019 6:42:00 AM
Such a lovely,clever and cute poem! perfectly rhymed and rhythmic flow, and Fluffy the cat at the end was the cutest surprise. Well done Wren, Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/19/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend my friend!
Date: 1/2/2019 7:21:00 AM
Well written, Wren..ending was a surprise as you had me believing otherwise. Best for a win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/2/2019 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Vijay!
Date: 1/1/2019 10:42:00 PM
o my I am laughing at the naughty things I could say... Enjoyed this poem very much! Good luck in the contest :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/2/2019 6:31:00 PM
Thank you P.S.!

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