Snapped

Long-suffering shattered the window’s streaked pane
Tongue snapped like rubber band stretched beyond hell
Deep shards of blood pressure, jagged terrain
Fingernails screeching down slate boarded cell 

Tongue snapped like rubber band stretched beyond hell
Cat-o’-nine-tails lashing words into gashes
Fingernails screeching down slate boarded cell
Sunday school lessons reduced to ashes 

Cat-o’-nine-tails lashing words into gashes
Razor sharp chaos impervious to shame
Sunday school lessons reduced to ashes
Virtue out shadowed by rage's bright flame 

Razor sharp chaos impervious to shame
Deep shards of blood pressure, jagged terrain
Virtue out shadowed by rage's bright flame
Long-suffering shattered the window’s streaked pane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Congrats Nancy on your great win in Pantoum with this wonderful write luv..
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July 27, 2011 at 1:50 PM
intense write!! congrats on the placement in the contest and hope to see you in many more winner's circles.
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "Pantoum" contest Nancy. Love, Carol
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