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Snap Shot Keeps Vigil

Mom and Dad, holding paper hearts, come to life in this photo taken on their 60th Anniversary. On the second line of this poem love-s-miles can be read two ways. Love smiles for the time my parents were together or Love’s miles since Mom passed away.
SNAP SHOT KEEPS VIGIL each holding their hearts love-s-miles in 3d vision leaning on cloud nine hand of mock clock ticks seconds i n f i n i t e s i m a l squeeze 2/20/2021 Bite Size Poem no14 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Paul Callus
Date: 7/28/2021 12:31:00 PM
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So much said in these five lines, Kim. That photo will always bring precious memories. ~ Congratulations on your win. Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 12:37:00 PM
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Who knew smiles depended on soulmates. Their smiles priceless. Thank you, Paul!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/28/2021 6:09:00 AM
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Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 8:55:00 AM
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Thank you, Christuraj!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/26/2021 8:50:00 PM
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Ah, such a wonderful photo; I am glad that you have it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2021 4:55:00 AM
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It is at my Dad’s house on his mantel. My parents - the great romantics. So in love.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/21/2021 9:32:00 AM
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Nice word play, Kim. Yes, we shared cloud nine.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 11:02:00 AM
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Thank you, Subimal!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/21/2021 6:40:00 AM
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I had a wife for almost forty years. Now four years later I still grieve. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 7:02:00 AM
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Hugs, my friend. I know you miss the love of your life.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/21/2021 6:31:00 AM
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Wow60 years together , a fantastic achievement Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 7:03:00 AM
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And my Dad thought they would have more. 60 years is a wow. Thanks, dear friend!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/21/2021 5:52:00 AM
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This was amazing Kim. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 7:04:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Chris! Hugs ~
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/21/2021 5:47:00 AM
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Your love for your parents I feel in your words, Kim. No better legacy that the love you treasure.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 7:04:00 AM
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Thank you so much!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/21/2021 5:37:00 AM
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I like to think that, such love follows us an enternity. Nicely written, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 7:04:00 AM
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Me too!

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