Snap into Me a song

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The on again, off again relationship. Is it on or off?  

[Verse]
He snaps into me
in all the right ways
in all the right places

that magic phrase
he completes me
says what I am feeling

Excites my breathing
gets me worked up and on fire
lights up my hearts desire

How could he walk away?
how could he leave that way?
Our love now in memories
never fully realized

And now I am left with a half open door
wondering if hes coming back for more
does he care at all?
is he wrapped up with some other chicka?

[Chorus]

[vocals longing]

wondering

thinking back 

This was not just some sort of life hack, come back..

what we had was rare in fact

touching on so many facets of our lives

sparking off our personalities and our very drive

I want him

I desire him

I manifested him in the first place

I believe it

and you should see us

we are like teens its indecent

kinda awesome

this really blows some

is he coming back for me?

I can't move on.... 
(I can't move on)

I can't move on

it's just not done

he was the one

I can't move on

[Verse]
He snaps into me
in all the right ways
in all the right places

that magic phrase
he completes me
says what I am feeling

Excites my breathing
gets me worked up and on fire
lights up my heart's desire

How could he walk away?
how could he leave that way?
Our love now in memories
never fully realized

And now I am left with a half open door
wondering if hes coming back for more
does he care at all?

or was I just a score?

I want more

I want more

so much more

I do

I want you


[Verse]
He snaps into me
in all the right ways
in all the right places

that magic phrase
he completes me
echos my feelings

Excites my breathing
gets me worked up and on fire
Stirs up my heart's desire

How could he walk away?
why would he leave that way?
Our love now only in texts
but in my heart its etched

And now I am left with a half open door
wondering if he's gone for sure
does he care at all?
is he wrapped up with some other chicka?

Is our love that bleak?

[Chorus]

[vocals longing]


I can't move on.... 
(I can't move on)

it's just not done

he was the one

I can't move on

[Verse]
He snaps into me
in all the right ways
in all the right places

that magic phrase
he completes me
echos my feelings

excites my breathing
gets me worked up and on fire
lights up my heart's desire

How could you walk away?
how could you leave that way?
Our love now in memories
never fully realized

And its him big time 
that excites my breathing
gets me worked up and all on fire
lights me up as my heart's desire

How could you walk away?
how could you leave that day?
with nothing but a text
you were getting blitzed?
Our love now in memories
never fully realized

and at times now I sit down
and just cry... 

[break]


[musical interlude]

And I am left with a half open door
wondering if you are coming back for more
do you care at all?

or was I just a score?

I want more (I want more)

I want more (I want more)

I want more (I want more)

so much more

I do

I want you (I want you)

I want you

[musical interlude]

[outro]


[end]

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Date: 11/15/2024 10:35:00 AM
This reminds me of many relationship, on and off.. until one person has the will to let the other go.. sometimes, still in love with them, but they have to get away... such is human nature.. Like Tina Turner said, whats the point of a heart, when a heart can get broken..... You write great lyrics..
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Susan Manley
Date: 11/15/2024 5:09:00 PM
Thank you! Still in the throes of it. The passion, the interaction, the back and forth. Like a game of tennis... Love , Love LOL I have more music coming. - Susan "Artimus The Poet" on youtube, spotify and all the streamers.
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