Snake-Shape Garden

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 11:12 AM
This has a place in my heart and in my faves list. xomo
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Very kind and sweet of you, my friend... And truly, I and it would rather have a place in your heart than a contest prize any day of the week, hour of the day, minute of the hour,... :) gw
Coulstock Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:49 PM
So clever Gershon.Love it.
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Thank you for checking this one out, Sylvia! Best wishes, Gershon
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:03 AM
- Wooow ... well done, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thank you for brightening up my day with your visit, Anne-Lise! :) gw
Man Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 12:35 AM
Getshon.. beautiful and creative, I salute you!
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Ssssalutessss are appreciated, Lyric. Thank you! ~ Gershon
Richards Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 7:56 PM
This was a clever entry and such a fun poem that has slithered across my web page !!! You have made me smile, Gershon!! Good luck !!
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 8:24 PM
Ah, a smile is worth its weight in gold. Keep smiling, Carrie! Thank you for encouragement! :) gw
Bauer Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:54 PM
ha! very clever and i love the way you've ended this...
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 5:02 PM
Thank you for your kind words and for checking this one out, Ilene! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Nicely done! Clever!
Gauthier Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Awesome, Gershon. Beautiful poem.
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Line. Appreciated!!
Lane Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:10 PM
and Eve should've hissed at that evil snake, "Get out of my garden." Clever visual, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:42 PM
You're so right. She really should have done that. Then hisssstory would have been a lot different! Thank you for checking this one out, Lin. Appreciated. ~ Gershon
Allison Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:39 PM
how creative Gershon :-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Apropos the story of Creation, I guess. Beginner's luck, for sure! Thanks, Jan!! :)
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