Snake Eyes Stay

The snake slowly slithered
Away but it's eyes
Are still here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 5, 2021 at 10:06 PM
Haha... Are the eyes still here because of the fright of being so close as it slithered? Lol
Chamberlain Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 2:50 PM
I really enjoyed your poem. Have a lovely day.
Keen Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 11:57 AM
I like snake poems--Emily Dickinson's, D.H Lawrence's and Uwe Stroh's (related to the beer?). I will carry tose yes with me until I cast my skin. Bill Keen
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January 9, 2015 at 1:52 PM
SMH, not even a haiku.. :/ 2/10, would not read again
Stroh Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 11:25 PM
sorry you feel that way
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