Snail Shell Relativity

A snail makes his home inside a shell.
"My home", I say, "is a living hell".
 A snail without a shell's a slug.
"I guess, my home's not so bad", I shrug.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 12:39 PM
You have a clever way of writing a humorous poem. This one is priceless.
Crandall Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 5:36 PM
Thanks, appreciated Hilda :-)
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June 4, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Such a creative fun poem David!! Debx
Crandall Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Deb!
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