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Poetry/Sedoka/Snack Too Yummy Mommy
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1634-007-04
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, April 04, 2024
For the International Contest, Search The Bus
Sponsor, Miranda Hawley

First Place

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"We were all lost, broken, and empty,
until we saw those missing kids again."

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Snack Too Yummy Mommy

 

Bus driver frantic,
searching for two missing kids,
who did not get off the bus !
Found them on the floor,
between the last seats eating,
driver, parents now happy !

kidlostsedoka

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Robert Sidwell

April 22, 2024 at 9:59 AM

Such a fun and creative take on the contest. Loved it! Congrats on the win!

Constance La France

April 23, 2024 at 12:49 PM

Robert, thank you for the compliment, comment and congrats, appreciate, Constance

Miranda Hawley

April 21, 2024 at 3:06 PM

The bus driver and or the monitor did their job properly since the children were found. Congratulations on your win in my contest.

Constance La France

April 21, 2024 at 3:49 PM

Miranda, thank you for the contest and my great placement, appreciate the comment and congratulation

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 6, 2024 at 11:39 AM

Hello Constance, i am glad that the children were found. Love & Friendship /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 8, 2024 at 4:07 PM

Hello Constance, you are welcome. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/

Constance La France

April 6, 2024 at 4:19 PM

Darlene, thank you for the comment, hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

April 4, 2024 at 5:36 PM

Dear Constance, your brief yet powerful poem captures a moment of panic and relief with such vividness. The urgency of the bus driver's search juxtaposed with the innocence of the children enjoying their snacks creates a scene that is both heart-pounding and heartwarming. Your ability to convey a range of emotions in just a few lines is truly impressive. This is delightful and relatable slice of life. - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France

April 6, 2024 at 4:20 PM

Daniel, thank you for the compliment and the wonderful compliment, blessings and hugs

Snack Too Yummy Mommy

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