Smudged Ink

Loin cloth draped around his anorexic body the Buddha

Searched for the Middle Way between Nothing and All

Counted his blessings and figs as his thoughts focussed

In meditation for humility compassion and lasting peace

The tree of life’s branches lightened his shadows of doubt

Enticed the suffering of suffering to lead from above


Aristotle escaped from Plato’s cave into the sunshine

Golden Mean on his mind he foraged for balance of virtue

Moderated knowledge with feelings of exploring for wisdom

A tiny window of opportunity between secrecy and honesty

Reckless and cowardice tempting from both incomplete ends

Good humour and absurdity longing for tranquility’s resolution


Carl Gustav Jung took up the reigns drawn by polar opposites

Between living and death in archetypal subconscious conscience

Monumental conflict depicted as complements not contradictions

A seeming paradox of incongruent and existential proportions

Like the jester in Tarot’s antimony of beginning and infinite end

The persona became more than a mere mask or Janus faced challenge


The poet’s stream of consciousness meanwhile flows as ink in his pen

Scratches at the surface quite tense in his hand pointing the quill

Towards investigation and unexceptional essence of lost meaning

Guided by the inner Self and nemesis of turmoil and equilibrium


19th January 2020
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Radhakrishna Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations on an excellent composition and a well deserved win!! Like the way you merged and compared polar concepts and beliefs!
Gauthier Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 9:37 AM
Bravo, Kai.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:59 AM
This is such an impressive introspective write Kai. Very philosophical and thought provoking. I enjoyed it very much. I too take the middle way. xxoo
Neumann Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate that and will try to sit under my Bodhi tree today. Kind wishes, Kai
Rose  Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 9:29 PM
Thank you for the gift of your poetry this evening: )Kai
Neumann Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:29 AM
Thank you Pixie. I need that poetic self-expression and am glad that you liked the poem. Kind wishes, Kai
Devonshire Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 4:14 PM
Wish I knew more about the philosophers you mention, Kai. And I can see the connection between thoughtful poetry and philosophy. Beautifully penned! Best wishes, Carolyn
Neumann Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Thank you Carolyn. I studied only one year of philosophy in my mid fifties and it was so worth it. Kind wishes on a path to the Golden Mean, Kai
Wolf Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 3:37 PM
Deep contemplation, Kai. Perhaps East meets West in the writings of poets. Cheers , gw
Wolf Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Yes, Hesse was a great one alright. His novels were a grand (and pleasurable) way to learn something about Buddha and Buddhism. I even got away with teaching one in a Yeshiva high school one year. Hard to believe now... Thanks, Kai. ~ Gershon
Neumann Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:40 AM
It does. Hermann Hesse is one of the great writers, Who achieved just that. Kind wishes, Kai
Adams Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 1:31 PM
love the title...it drew me into the depths of this write... very deep depths to your words... great use of language and vivid imagery... wonderful penning Kai :) hugs
Neumann Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:43 AM
Thank you Sandra. As long as we can think and write, we are blessed. Kind wishes, Kai
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 1:25 PM
reading this, I can easily infer that you are very interested in the study of philosophy and asking the bigger questions! Deep one!
Neumann Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:47 AM
Thanks Andrea. Studying one year of philosophy has changed my thoughts and my life. Kind wishes, Kai
One Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 5:21 AM
Very philosophical indeed... deep thoughts etched through your pen..
Neumann Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:49 AM
Books are my friend and so is my pen. Let the ink flow, smudge and realign, Kai
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