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Smooth Caramel

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You say you're not magic, but you conjur incredibly well Thoughts of a wand forming happiness, a beautiful carousel A ring that dispels loves hunger like a dinner bell I choose to be drowned inside your pools of smooth caramel May your sweetness be the last thing I ever see or smell Damn the devil, YOU can have my soul; a confession I pray tell The way you protect my heart shields me from every hell My love is well past forever; no need, for your eyes to compel

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Date: 2/6/2025 8:25:00 PM
Again, liked the flow and rhyme and deep, deep feeling. <3
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/7/2025 3:12:00 AM
Cliche, as it maybe, "the devil is truly in the details." My happiness is simply found in never forgetting them. Warmly A.S.

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