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Smooth Caramel

You say you're not magic, but you conjur incredibly well
Thoughts of a wand forming happiness, a beautiful carousel
A ring that dispels loves hunger like a dinner bell
I choose to be drowned inside your pools of smooth caramel
May your sweetness be the last thing I ever see or smell
Damn the devil, YOU can have my soul; a confession I pray tell
The way you protect my heart shields me from every hell
My love is well past forever; no need, for your eyes to compel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 8:25 PM
Again, liked the flow and rhyme and deep, deep feeling. <3
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February 7, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Cliche, as it maybe, "the devil is truly in the details." My happiness is simply found in never forgetting them. Warmly A.S.
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