Smoldering Men

- Very creative poem, Las ... (the title is very powerful in itself) ... an excellent poem - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Congrats on your win Sotto, Very nicely penned

Back with big congratulations in your win. Hugs my friend.

Very good deep write, Lasaad. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings my friend

great rhyming, Sotto and such an interesting theme

Your command of language is awesome. You write in so many styles. This one stirs the soul amid the imagery. Best wishes for the contest!

“ our souls, toasted by the sun's pyre” that is a brilliant and very creative line! Your way with words is always so profound and this is another very powerful poem, one of the most soul hitting quintilla iv read recently, that would get any reader to think deeply and connect with all that you’ve woven so meticulously! I love the moving imagery and depth of your lines! So artistic and sublime rhymes as always! Flows seamlessly! Goodluck for the contest

Dear Lasaad, I am in awe of your powerful poetic pen! The vibrant, potent, passionate imagery is keenly and my heart and imagination celebrate your grand artistry and creative finesse. Great rhymes adorn your amazing metaphors that command attention! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

An interesting choice for this contest, however you always think out of the box with your vivid imagination... You have said so much in only five lines and expressed it with great flow and rhymes.. did you include the contest title in your notes or in the poem? I think its not allowed in contests, maybe you need to check other entries too.. All the best.