Smoking You

Loving you
Was like smoking a cigarette.
Every laugh and smile
Filling me like a poison,
Every gentle kiss 
Consuming part of me. 
Loosing myself
With every drag of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 22, 2015 at 4:24 PM
if your name isn't mary then I wont smoke....but if it is then I will probably choke....because cigarettes will never do it for me....but I do Love mary jane, she is in my identity....;)
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August 11, 2015 at 12:24 AM
I don't do cigarettes, but do you know mary....she Loves and inspires me in a much amount so very....she never nags, never complains, she always knows just what to do....the reason why I smoke her is she helps me write Beauty for those like you...;)
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