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Smoker Jack

What this guy dose every single day Smokes like a chimmly, Smoker Jack I tell him if you want to keep on this way Your life expectancy, is a heart attack But never listens to any given warning Smoking, he's got a bad chest again And you can hear him every morning Choking he now is, coughing up flem With all those poisons and every toxin Isn’t it enough your hair and nails yellow I say to think what you are actually inhalin He's like puff after puff, inhale and blow! But then it don’t matter whatever you say He will always tell you it's his last Pack It is what this guy dose every single day Smokes like a chimmly, Smoker Jack. I did use to smoke a lot myself not just cigarettes but the old mj too im sure i mentioned breifly in age of life poem and othe things in my teens twentys maybe now just being high on life or though dont think id qit everythong a drink now and agin is good and of course there sex mybe were all druges how many of us drink tea every day or coffee this was more a joke towards brothin law as he is like one after another this kind of croped up as I was writing other writes another and time without really thinking losly put togeather not alot of content or much sffort WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT 2013 INSPIERD BY POETS ON SOUP,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,xx note UPDATED A LITTLE BETTER CONTEXT CHANHED TITLE ALSO THIS BASED ON A FRIEND INSPIERD BY AT TIME,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,1996

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