Smoker Jack

What this guy dose every single day
Smokes like a chimmly, Smoker Jack
I tell him if you want to keep on this way
Your life expectancy, is a heart attack

But never listens to any given warning
Smoking, he's got a bad chest again
And you can hear him every morning
Choking he now is, coughing up flem

With all those poisons and every toxin
Isn’t it enough your hair and nails yellow
I say to think what you are actually inhalin
He's like puff after puff, inhale and blow!

But then it don’t matter whatever you say
He will always tell you it's his last Pack
It is what this guy dose every single day
Smokes like a chimmly, Smoker Jack. 





I did use to smoke a lot myself not just cigarettes but the old mj too im sure i mentioned
breifly in age of life poem and othe things in my teens twentys 
maybe now just being high on life or though  dont think id qit everythong a drink now and agin is good
and of course there sex mybe were all druges how many of us drink tea every day  or coffee
this was more a joke towards brothin law  as he is like one after another 

this kind of croped up as I was writing other writes another and time

without really thinking losly put togeather   not alot of content or much sffort
WRITTEN BY   MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT        2013   INSPIERD BY POETS ON SOUP,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,xx 

note UPDATED A LITTLE BETTER CONTEXT CHANHED TITLE ALSO   THIS BASED ON A FRIEND 
INSPIERD BY AT TIME,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,1996

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.

Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad