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Smokeless Candles

The napkins were the first to know a party pooper breached the guard an uninvited wind did blow as rain, once distant, now fell hard on smokeless candles, slightly charred. ©2/12/2022 Quintain (English) Poetry Contest Sponsor – Emile Pinet

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Date: 2/27/2022 3:39:00 PM
So clever.
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Date: 2/13/2022 8:51:00 PM
Only you could write this, John. It's uniquely magnificent! Happy Barbequed Birthday! ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/12/2022 1:15:00 PM
very good!
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Date: 2/12/2022 12:24:00 PM
Great one John :)
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