Smoke Rings Escape

Smoke rings escape out to the world ~ Soon dissipated, nothing's uncurled

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2019 8:07:00 PM

I used to watch my mother and her friends make these, completely unaware that I thought it was the coolest thing ever.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2019 11:20:00 AM

Funny, I thought it was cool when my parents made smoke rings too--- 'till I learned that it wasn't cool at all to smoke in the first place... Memories... :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/9/2019 10:25:00 PM

Ooh, I like it. A lot. x

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2019 9:08:00 AM

Even your comment's in the shape of a smoke ring---uncurled, of course. LOL. Thanks!!! :) gw