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Smoke and Sin

The club was dim, a haze of gin and gold, where jazz ran slick like honey through the air. She stood in shadow, wicked, dark, and bold, red dress a warning--men still stopped to stare. Her cigarette burned low, a dying spark, a curl of smoke that whispered through the room. She met my eyes and smiled--slow, and dark-- a prelude to the kiss that spelled my doom. Her voice was silk, laced soft with bourbon heat, each word a lie that tasted rich and sweet. She dragged me close, a moth into the flame, and laughed as I surrendered to the game. The night grew cold, the music played its tune-- I turned… too late. She vanished with the moon.

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Date: 5/6/2025 8:25:00 PM
With the moon and a sparkling star
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Date: 5/4/2025 11:45:00 AM
"where jazz ran slick like honey...a curl of smoke that whispered through the room...laced soft with bourbon heat." Masterful descriptions here Alesia. I believe Ann Rice would enjoy your storytelling. A real witch of wonder!...J.A.B.
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