Smoke

Smoke
Amazing and beautiful
Waving the past position
Leaving the heat
Afraid of facing the creator

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Phyllis Babcock

March 1, 2011 at 8:16 AM

EH a fellow Canadian. Welcome aboard the wonderful world of poetry soup. I did not realize you were new until I looked at your posting date. Smoke will not hide us from the creator. God Bless Phyl

March 1, 2011 at 4:17 AM

This is great Ryan, very intense. N :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 28, 2011 at 4:35 PM

Intense and dramatic lines Ryan... try to stay warm in that Canadian paradise u call home luv.. we are freezing here still in USA... hope u will try to enter the new Haiku contest .. your poetry will get read more frequently and noticed too..luv.. good luck..

Robert A. Dufresne

February 28, 2011 at 4:26 PM

It isw mesmerizing isn't it? Thought provoking.

Michelle Mac Donald

February 28, 2011 at 2:45 PM

Very clever write, Ryan. "Smoke" does appear to be "Leaving the heat".:) I suppose "one can run, but one can't hide", from the creator. Thank you for your comment, and the opportunity of reading your work! Best to you, Mikki

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