Smoke

Smoke Amazing and beautiful Waving the past position Leaving the heat Afraid of facing the creator

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/1/2011 8:16:00 AM

EH a fellow Canadian. Welcome aboard the wonderful world of poetry soup. I did not realize you were new until I looked at your posting date. Smoke will not hide us from the creator. God Bless Phyl

Date: 3/1/2011 4:17:00 AM

This is great Ryan, very intense. N :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 4:35:00 PM

Intense and dramatic lines Ryan... try to stay warm in that Canadian paradise u call home luv.. we are freezing here still in USA... hope u will try to enter the new Haiku contest .. your poetry will get read more frequently and noticed too..luv.. good luck..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/28/2011 4:26:00 PM

It isw mesmerizing isn't it? Thought provoking.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/28/2011 2:45:00 PM

Very clever write, Ryan. "Smoke" does appear to be "Leaving the heat".:) I suppose "one can run, but one can't hide", from the creator. Thank you for your comment, and the opportunity of reading your work! Best to you, Mikki