Smitten Strangers

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Long before lips lock, there is the very first time when eyes lock. What stories they tell, and what moves they make! I sought to capture that electric moment in this poem.

When across this bustling crowd 
Our loving eyes hew secret tunnels
Their sweet messages to exchange
And two strangers dumb and numb with love
Suddenly want to kiss but not with their lips, 
To hug but not with their arms, 
And to confess love but not with their tongues 
Whilst their tongues, lips, and arms shed 
their numbing coats of ice—
It is just then that their flaming eyes
Must reach across the thawing ice and by one
look plant a kiss; and another a hug; and 
yet another a confession.
For between smitten strangers too timid to touch,
A loving look makes the softest kiss, 
A longing look the warmest hug, 
And a daring look the loudest confession of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/4/2016 11:15:00 PM
This is exquisite Agona_Rahaba
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Agona Apell
Date: 10/9/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Rahaba! Nice of you to drop by...
Date: 10/4/2016 12:51:00 PM
Extraordinary perceptive and unique take on the human love connection. I like it! :-)
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Agona Apell
Date: 10/9/2016 4:04:00 PM
I am glad that you like it, Tom! Thanks for the compliment
Date: 10/4/2016 6:06:00 AM
Yes, that look does happen sometimes be it from just recognition to even more interest..Enjoyed reading your expression of the thought..Congrats on being featured..Sara
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Agona Apell
Date: 10/9/2016 4:12:00 PM
I always wondered if that amorous look exists in the eyes or it is something in the mind. That is, would an onlooker see the same look in the eyes of the lovebirds? Thanks for your kind words, Sara!
Date: 12/29/2015 9:37:00 AM
Yes, that first look, which leads to lifetime commitment. My husband says that when we first shook hands, he knew. It took me a little longer, but the spark was there!
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/18/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, Agona. And may the Lord bless you richly as well.
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Agona Apell
Date: 2/18/2016 8:21:00 AM
62 years! That's remarkable and a worthy subject for celebratory poetry. Lord bless you with many more years together.
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/7/2016 1:49:00 PM
It has lasted almost 62 years for us. Guess you could call that a lifetime spark.
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Agona Apell
Date: 2/7/2016 12:50:00 AM
Hello Cona! Delighted to find someone to whom the sentiment expressed rings a bell. I wish that look would last the whole life of a relationship.
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