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Smitten

All I need is to have you touch me and be by my side.
I am smitten with a passion, it all seems a mystery.      

With the warmth of your touch my tears will subside.
All I need is to have you touch me and be by my side.

Now I can hold my head up I have no need to hide.
There’s nothing like this I have known in my history.

All I need is to have you touch me and be by my side.
I am smitten with a passion, it all seems a mystery.

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Mark Toney August 10, 2023 at 1:47 PM SV, my wife and I just celebrated our 50th anniversary, and your triolet pretty much sums up our relationship. I especially like “Now I can hold my head up I have no need to hide. There’s nothing like this I have known in my history.” Awesome! Speaks Volumes August 16, 2023 at 5:25 PM Thank you so much

Linda Alice Fowler August 10, 2023 at 12:14 PM A mystery of love Svvie! Nice job! Congratulations! :) Speaks Volumes August 16, 2023 at 5:25 PM Thank you so much LAF.

Kim Merryman August 7, 2023 at 7:22 PM Speaks Volumes, love is one of life's mysteries and you have portrayed "smitten" well. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Speaks Volumes August 16, 2023 at 5:24 PM Thank you so much

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2023 at 7:23 PM The title Smitten clearly represents the emotions you expressed here!! Speaks Volumes July 25, 2023 at 11:02 PM That was the idea..... lol glad it did! Thanx Andrea for your kind words. Best Wishes SV :)

Joseph P. DiMino July 25, 2023 at 9:49 AM The expression of love, gives the soul wings and a never-ending span of light.... I doubt most everything in life, but never the power of love. Speaks Volumes July 25, 2023 at 10:31 AM Joe I think your comment is more poetic than my poem. Thanks so much.