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All I need is to have you touch me and be by my side. I am smitten with a passion, it all seems a mystery. With the warmth of your touch my tears will subside. All I need is to have you touch me and be by my side. Now I can hold my head up I have no need to hide. There’s nothing like this I have known in my history. All I need is to have you touch me and be by my side. I am smitten with a passion, it all seems a mystery.

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Date: 8/10/2023 1:47:00 PM
SV, my wife and I just celebrated our 50th anniversary, and your triolet pretty much sums up our relationship. I especially like “Now I can hold my head up I have no need to hide. There’s nothing like this I have known in my history.” Awesome!
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 8/10/2023 12:14:00 PM
A mystery of love Svvie! Nice job! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much LAF.
Date: 8/7/2023 7:22:00 PM
Speaks Volumes, love is one of life's mysteries and you have portrayed "smitten" well. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 7/25/2023 7:23:00 PM
The title Smitten clearly represents the emotions you expressed here!!
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Date: 7/25/2023 11:02:00 PM
That was the idea..... lol glad it did! Thanx Andrea for your kind words. Best Wishes SV :)
Date: 7/25/2023 9:49:00 AM
The expression of love, gives the soul wings and a never-ending span of light.... I doubt most everything in life, but never the power of love.
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Date: 7/25/2023 10:31:00 AM
Joe I think your comment is more poetic than my poem. Thanks so much.

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