Smiling Firefly

Firefly dances
confident above the toad
soaring in the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Ashley. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 1:03 AM
Vivid images conveyed in this lovely Haiku, Asheley. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Phookan Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:19 AM
Love fireflies.. Congrats Ashley on your win in this contest... gautami
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Interesting..Congrats..Sara
K. Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 11:07 PM
This is so cute, I can just picture this vividly, Ashley with that firefly sort of teasing the toad :) Lovely image and super congrats on your win :D
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 9:08 PM
Congratulations on your win in the haiku contest, Ashley.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 6:44 PM
Congrats Ashley on your beautiful win in the contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy another great win with luv..
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 7:02 PM
Beautiful images in the haiku, Ashley
A   Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 4:53 PM
that's the beauty of nature, enjoyed your haiku, take care,..p.d.
Flanders Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:16 PM
When you only use ten words in a poem it can be a struggle, not here, i even like that there is only one firefly, not an "s" to be seen, though we all know they were! Enjoyed cheers.
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