Smiley Faces

I saw ur :) face,
After hearin ur ringtone.
..My inbox is full
...of your picture messages.
....F-Y-I..I luv U.

Ill B There ASAP
2 give U a :)
..Ur :) give makes me :)
...Ill C U soon.
....B ready 4 me. 

It's gettin L8 again
Ill T-T-Y L8er :)
..My battery is low
..Ill c U whn I get hme.
...& we can X O X O :)


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 6:28 AM
It's better late than never, they say, Raul. I finally have time to go back and read a few contest winners. I definitely did NOT want to miss out on this one. Congratulations for your success in Deborah's dialect contest. Very creative! Smiling, Dane
Brown Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Raul. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 8:48 AM
What a clever entry for Deborah's contest....I wouldn't have thought of text messaging...a great idea!! Congratulations, Raul !! Love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbies contest Raul.Rgds Brian
King Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 8:06 AM
A very modern love poem - congrats on your win!
Stella Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 5:50 AM
up to date with dialects very creative way to get the text system out lol congrats on placing in contest and thanks for the support keep up the great writing
Lacey Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 2:36 PM
cute way of communicating! (funny too)
Lopez Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 6:50 PM
gr8 wrk rm ,lol this is 2 good
Lynn Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 5:04 PM
this poem brought a :) to my face . makes me feel like a kid cause i do this with my partner . love the form to -rebecca
Hayton Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 2:09 PM
Gr8 poem about the txt age Raul, it made me smile, loved it, thankyou for your comment on my poem, love Jo xxx
Darwin Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:57 PM
A very uniue write! It made me smile! Thankyou for your comment on my most recent poem, it's very much appreciated ~Leander
Chircop Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 9:31 AM
This poem is very sw8 2b 4got10 and it made me smile:)different--well penned-charma
Scoville Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 1:30 AM
Aww texting how sweet....*sighs* to love someone that much....The Southern Belle
Null Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 10:42 PM
I really like this, it reminds me of my daughter, I've had to decipher her tex messages so often that it's easy now.....Karla
Fraser Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 4:19 PM
Awesome verse Raul, made me chuckle. if i tried texting like these youngsters, i would have arthiritus - it's a koolio write>>James= :-)
Richards Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 1:42 PM
This is wonderful, and timely...Raul ! I really try to keep up modern technology, however, I'm afraid I have missed out on the texting generation! (Geeze...now I really feel old!!) :(
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Raul, interesting write. This person understood it and I don't text yet. Not too old to learn. I may morph into a teen after reading this. Sara
Harper Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 1:08 PM
btw I posted more poems
Harper Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 1:07 PM
AWESOME wish I had a cell tho........TTYL lol
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