Edward Ebbs Poet Rhyme

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Smiles For You

Maybe it's the way you talk
But it's watching you walk
That makes my heart knock

It could be those tight jeans
Your love handles are quite lean
When I think about it, I scream

Edward J Ebbs - April 10, 2012


Written a poetry Contest, 1-6 Lines of Romance & Love Free 

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Charmaine Chircop December 8, 2012 at 11:20 PM :)sweet post

Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2012 at 2:04 PM Brilliant Ed.....congrats !!! well done! - oxox Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2012 at 7:16 PM I LIKE this. Congratulations, ED

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 1:26 PM Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Ed. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti April 16, 2012 at 9:20 AM I always wondered what men were looking at, now I know it's not the love handls. Thanks for the smile. Congratulations.

Ralph Taylor April 15, 2012 at 5:37 PM Congrats on your win, Ed. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Wilma Neels April 15, 2012 at 1:51 PM lol, love the love handles line Ed, you added some wit to yours.. Me like ;) congratulations on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2012 at 8:27 AM dcongrats Ed on a wonderful write and win luv for contest by Russell..

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 11, 2012 at 12:47 AM a smooth delight,this is.well done.