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Maybe it's the way you talk But it's watching you walk That makes my heart knock It could be those tight jeans Your love handles are quite lean When I think about it, I scream Edward J Ebbs - April 10, 2012 Written a poetry Contest, 1-6 Lines of Romance & Love Free

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Date: 12/8/2012 11:20:00 PM
:)sweet post
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:04:00 PM
Brilliant Ed.....congrats !!! well done! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/17/2012 7:16:00 PM
I LIKE this. Congratulations, ED
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Ed. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2012 9:20:00 AM
I always wondered what men were looking at, now I know it's not the love handls. Thanks for the smile. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/15/2012 5:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Ed. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 4/15/2012 1:51:00 PM
lol, love the love handles line Ed, you added some wit to yours.. Me like ;) congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/15/2012 8:27:00 AM
dcongrats Ed on a wonderful write and win luv for contest by Russell..
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Date: 4/11/2012 12:47:00 AM
a smooth delight,this is.well done.
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