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Karen's 'What Makes Me Smile' Contest ~ May 18, 2025

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Smiles For Simple Pleasures

In a busy world I don't take for granted simple pleasures
Blooms, newly risen in Spring from bulbs planted last year
Rummaging through my collection of keepsake treasures.
My children saying those three special words I want to hear.

I smile when I have the involuntary reaction to give one back
to a stranger who has just offered a nod and a smile at me
I've found myself grinning, and doing so with great satisfaction
when butterflies emerged, knowing that I'd set them free

That first sweet bite of a warm cinnamon bun with icing
The feeling when first waking and taking a morning stretch
Purchasing what I want, then finding it has a sale pricing
When I'm happy with a painting I've created from a sketch

When gifted with a bouquet of flowers for no reason at all
Seeing pewter clouds in the sky when there's need for rain
Watching my granddaughter take motherly care of her doll
Feeling the gentle touch of a friend, trying to ease my pain

Having an unimpeded view of stars brightly glowing at night
When I've found that daydreams have set my thoughts adrift
Watching dawn's roseate skies and lavender hues at twilight
And being offered forgiveness for a sin: the most revered gift
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Beaufort Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 5:43 PM
Lin, this about says it all. You didn't mention anything capitalistic and the poem reflects what is really important in life. Yes, we're glad there are people at work doing things that might help society's members enjoy the very things you like to experience. If most people understood what you are saying, there would be an epidemic of peace and happiness throughout the land. This is a real winner in my book. Smiles!!
Lane Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Capitalism, politics, the weather... none of those make me smile. Those things that mean the most to me... personally are what I find gratifying. Ninth place on this one... meh. Thanks for enjoying it.
Canerdy Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 2:03 PM
Lin, this is SO lovely and moving. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Lane Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 2:43 PM
Thank you ever so much, Janice.
Jones Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 9:19 PM
Congratulations Lin on your win in my contest! My favorite line is the last one ! The entire poem is another great work by your talented pen! Thanks so much for sharing! And thanks for supporting my contest!
Lane Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 2:41 PM
Thank you, Karen.
Parker Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:17 PM
Sounds like you live in a world of pure joy, sprinkled with happiness, this poem made me smile, dear poet
Lane Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 2:40 PM
My world is far from perfect, but definitely a happy place. thanks, Frederic.
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 3:37 PM
This is sweet and beautiful. Good luck in the contest- :)
Lane Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 2:40 PM
Thank you so much, Paige.
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