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I can’t smile without you
I miss the days long ago
We held hands
A soft kiss on the cheek was udder bliss
Nothing in life seemed amiss

Now you have long gone
Six feet under the ground
That day is embedded in stone
You and your suitcase, gonna leave me alone

I bound you tight
Pulling hair from my head
As I chained sawed you dead
Blood in my chalice, I drank

Lustfully I carved you into dinner
Lamb chops in sauce so sweet
Your family loved the meal
If they only knew
They might have stayed thinner

My roses sing every spring
Happily devouring your rotten bones
Leaving me was evil you see
Never the less, tiss I who smiles

I smile at the coffee shop
I smile more as the butcher mops
I am not dark, no not at all
My darkest, I smile for all to see
Cause you have all but gone!

Happy days are here again!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/3/2015 11:10:00 AM
Oh how I wish you wont smile at me ,too Arthur!!!! ... ^__^ nicely done, my friend!!! haha
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:51:00 PM
Does this mean you are not coming over for dinner?
Date: 4/30/2015 9:23:00 PM
I had fun also reading the comments to this creepy poem! I like stuff unusual like this. Great creepy pics too,Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, with all the comments I might knock off a few more later! LOL
Date: 4/29/2015 6:28:00 PM
I swear I commented on this earlier...hmm..anyway creepy and cruel I smile at your write :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2015 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Cas, freaky enough? :)
Date: 4/29/2015 3:57:00 PM
Arthur, you have penned a gruesome one for us today, yikes, but so well written, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, nearly the same
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2015 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings
Date: 4/28/2015 12:02:00 PM
ummm...well that was... quite alarming! Great images and you have such a vivid imagination! Wow... good job. Meg
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Meg, Dinner is at 8pm
Date: 4/28/2015 2:13:00 AM
a disturbing yet superb piece.. i almost lost my breath, arthur!.. huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Nette, glad everyone is "smiling"
Date: 4/27/2015 7:58:00 AM
Thought I would come back to read some comments.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I haven't killed anymore since this poem.
Date: 4/26/2015 4:56:00 PM
smiling arthur very beautifully crafted pen dear friend wishing you a blessed day
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 5:02:00 PM
Thank you liam, and I hope your family had a Happy Birthday celebrations!!!
Date: 4/26/2015 2:24:00 PM
- A WooooW from me ...... and a smile :) - - Well done, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, I may not be a visitor to Norway, I may need to ESCAPE to there and hide out in the fjords!!!!!! LOL
Date: 4/26/2015 12:55:00 PM
You have a strong well written poem that flirts with the twisted trappings of the mind's darker side. Emile.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Emile, exactly what I was going for!
Date: 4/26/2015 7:25:00 AM
Good morning "Dark One" you wrote this one as if you were Stephen King on Steroids.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Jan, my first poetic murder!!!! Hope I dont turn into a serial one!
Date: 4/26/2015 7:16:00 AM
Eww The imagery is so so vivid Arthur it sent chills down my spine Hannibal Lecter comes to town dressed as a smiling clown - and you have put me off my lamb dinner ... thanks:-( a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/26/2015 2:26:00 AM
Wicked...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 4:55:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/26/2015 12:48:00 AM
Hi Richard, I will allow you a second opinion!!
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