Smiles

In a plaza, when a smiling man
Is faced by a fuming woman:
 
Why are you angry if I smile?
I have been smiling for awhile,
Since the day I took from your lips
The smile you wanted to give
With a blow on your fingertips.
 
If my smile I wanted to give
I shouldn’t have been so naïve
To believe you would display
My smile in every public place
Like you are doing the whole day.
 
But aren’t we in a public place?
There is no shame, only grace.
I was just having an innocent walk
But now that you are awake,
Let’s smile and have less talk.
 
I was dreaming and not awake
The night you came to take
the smile which you still keep
Upon your lips all the time,
Wondering when I will sleep?
 
I was waiting the right time
To make our smiles both rhyme.
I will give your smile back,
Lower now your defenses:
Here is my smiling attack…
 
The woman is now silent
But the smile is permanent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/7/2016 5:10:00 AM
I love the way you patiently wait to enjoy the same artistic smile.. Amazing write. LINDA
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Date: 4/12/2015 6:14:00 PM
This poem is built around an interesting idea - the man taking the smile from the woman. And it's funny how they argue about how it is to be used. Nice poem Joao!
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João Camilo
Date: 4/12/2015 6:39:00 PM
Thanks Wally, I am glad you have liked the idea :)
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