Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Couplet

Smiles

Today I feel a little goofy
Hair wild and is all poofy

I made oatmeal it is so sloppy
Have to drink it with my coffee

Can not walk as my feet are going flip floppy
No swimming either the water is to choppy

Ding dong no nothings wrong
My clock just went bing bong

If this poem to your face brought a smile
Or maybe you just laughed for awhile

Then please know that I am happy as well
As I am locked back up in my padded cell

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Skat A August 1, 2015 at 1:21 PM Carol, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**

Daver Austin July 28, 2015 at 2:02 PM To hell with this serious stuff, eh, Carol? I will always read humor in a minute because I am somewhat of a nut myself. Bring on the straight jacket. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Joe Hinojosa January 27, 2012 at 12:39 PM thank you for your welcoming comment, i love this poem, just when you think its, funny, you suprise yourself,,,love it.joe

Susan Simpkins January 26, 2012 at 3:28 AM very good,love it

Maureen Lefanue January 11, 2012 at 7:12 PM Carol, It is a pleasure to share my poetry. Thank you for your congrats and kind comments. These tokens of personal appreciation make it all worthwhile. Love, Maureen :)

Nurudeen Olaniran January 4, 2012 at 2:13 PM you made me imagine happiness in lonelines. I love this lines. Good work ma.

Don Johnson December 6, 2011 at 3:46 PM words a flurry in a hurry, times a wasting at the gate, never mind not to worry, sip your coffee meditate...

Don Johnson November 17, 2011 at 3:46 PM side step from your padded cell, enjoy life by living well, don't be judged, i judge you not, sweet Carol Brown is all we got, sometimes...

Lizzie Treetop November 17, 2011 at 8:35 AM Carol it is lovely to be with goofy gals who get out of their padded cells. I reckon I'm there as well! Thanks for your encouragement X Lizzie

Margeret Bailey November 13, 2011 at 8:38 PM Very adorable and funny write!

Don Johnson November 10, 2011 at 5:44 PM You be in a funny mood, the words are not understewed, but cooked well in a trice, Thank you sweet Carol, nice...

Debbie Guzzi November 10, 2011 at 2:10 PM lol [they're coming to take us away!] light & love

James Fraser November 10, 2011 at 5:44 AM Your comments on my work always make me smile Carol, and they always will. This lovely smiling poem has sure made me smile today. Have a nice day :)

Wilma Neels November 9, 2011 at 6:20 AM You certainly brought some sunshine to my day Carol :) love Wilma

M.I.A . November 8, 2011 at 8:42 PM definitely smiling!

Matt Daniels November 8, 2011 at 8:14 AM This brought a smile to my face, and laughed a little! Even though I'm in the middle of testing..and the room is oh so silent! I got a few looks. Haha! But great write, enjoyed reading!!! I could feel the passion, and joy, and also calmness here! LOVED IT! It def. woke me up!

Sarah Seraphin November 8, 2011 at 8:07 AM * “Hahaha * Thank You * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Not Only The Pleasing Humour But Also * Your Beauties Lovely Visit & Congrads * Truly An Honour * I Must Return Unto Your Beauties Verse * Quite Appealing I Find The Titles * Yesss, Most Surely I Do * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Bl Devnath November 7, 2011 at 9:33 PM Thanks for Your sweet 'Smiles' for your feeling goofy. Hi, hi, hi,........ laughing loudly. Thanks for your comment on my poems and giving you congratulation for your win in all recent contests. Carry on my friend, waiting to read "Sweet laugh" again. bl

Olajide Adelana November 7, 2011 at 5:54 PM This one got me laughing out loud through to the end. Great work.

Carolyn Devonshire November 7, 2011 at 5:33 PM Thank you for your comments today, Carol, and congratulations on all of your recent wins as well. Stay safe and joyful, my friend. Love you, Carolyn

Jslambert Mister Roboto November 7, 2011 at 2:31 PM yes! Smiles indeed! Also, thank you for congrats-sing me on the wins! That brings more smiles!

Jack Horne November 7, 2011 at 9:05 AM LOL, great fun! Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

Kimberly Larocca November 6, 2011 at 7:53 PM This one made me laugh. Thanks so much Carol.

Carolyn Devonshire November 6, 2011 at 9:50 AM Is there room for two in your padded cell, Carol. My hair is "poofy" today too and I always feel a bit goofy. Delightful entry for Francine's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Kingsley Awoh November 5, 2011 at 5:08 AM very simple...good pen...friend

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