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Smiles

Today I feel a little goofy Hair wild and is all poofy I made oatmeal it is so sloppy Have to drink it with my coffee Can not walk as my feet are going flip floppy No swimming either the water is to choppy Ding dong no nothings wrong My clock just went bing bong If this poem to your face brought a smile Or maybe you just laughed for awhile Then please know that I am happy as well As I am locked back up in my padded cell

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Skat A

Date: 8/1/2015 1:21:00 PM

Carol, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**

Daver Austin

Date: 7/28/2015 2:02:00 PM

To hell with this serious stuff, eh, Carol? I will always read humor in a minute because I am somewhat of a nut myself. Bring on the straight jacket. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Joe Hinojosa

Date: 1/27/2012 12:39:00 PM

thank you for your welcoming comment, i love this poem, just when you think its, funny, you suprise yourself,,,love it.joe

Susan Simpkins

Date: 1/26/2012 3:28:00 AM

very good,love it

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/11/2012 7:12:00 PM

Carol, It is a pleasure to share my poetry. Thank you for your congrats and kind comments. These tokens of personal appreciation make it all worthwhile. Love, Maureen :)

Nurudeen Olaniran

Date: 1/4/2012 2:13:00 PM

you made me imagine happiness in lonelines. I love this lines. Good work ma.

Don Johnson

Date: 12/6/2011 3:46:00 PM

words a flurry in a hurry, times a wasting at the gate, never mind not to worry, sip your coffee meditate...

Don Johnson

Date: 11/17/2011 3:46:00 PM

side step from your padded cell, enjoy life by living well, don't be judged, i judge you not, sweet Carol Brown is all we got, sometimes...

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/17/2011 8:35:00 AM

Carol it is lovely to be with goofy gals who get out of their padded cells. I reckon I'm there as well! Thanks for your encouragement X Lizzie

Margeret Bailey

Date: 11/13/2011 8:38:00 PM

Very adorable and funny write!

Don Johnson

Date: 11/10/2011 5:44:00 PM

You be in a funny mood, the words are not understewed, but cooked well in a trice, Thank you sweet Carol, nice...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/10/2011 2:10:00 PM

lol [they're coming to take us away!] light & love

Hammam Hamad

Date: 11/10/2011 11:59:00 AM

Great words , I wish to have such a vocabularies. like you.

James Fraser

Date: 11/10/2011 5:44:00 AM

Your comments on my work always make me smile Carol, and they always will. This lovely smiling poem has sure made me smile today. Have a nice day :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/9/2011 6:20:00 AM

You certainly brought some sunshine to my day Carol :) love Wilma

M.I.A .

Date: 11/8/2011 8:42:00 PM

definitely smiling!

Matt Daniels

Date: 11/8/2011 8:14:00 AM

This brought a smile to my face, and laughed a little! Even though I'm in the middle of testing..and the room is oh so silent! I got a few looks. Haha! But great write, enjoyed reading!!! I could feel the passion, and joy, and also calmness here! LOVED IT! It def. woke me up!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/8/2011 8:07:00 AM

* “Hahaha * Thank You * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Not Only The Pleasing Humour But Also * Your Beauties Lovely Visit & Congrads * Truly An Honour * I Must Return Unto Your Beauties Verse * Quite Appealing I Find The Titles * Yesss, Most Surely I Do * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/7/2011 9:33:00 PM

Thanks for Your sweet 'Smiles' for your feeling goofy. Hi, hi, hi,........ laughing loudly. Thanks for your comment on my poems and giving you congratulation for your win in all recent contests. Carry on my friend, waiting to read "Sweet laugh" again. bl

Olajide Adelana

Date: 11/7/2011 5:54:00 PM

This one got me laughing out loud through to the end. Great work.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/7/2011 5:33:00 PM

Thank you for your comments today, Carol, and congratulations on all of your recent wins as well. Stay safe and joyful, my friend. Love you, Carolyn

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/7/2011 2:31:00 PM

yes! Smiles indeed! Also, thank you for congrats-sing me on the wins! That brings more smiles!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/7/2011 9:05:00 AM

LOL, great fun! Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

Kimberly Larocca

Date: 11/6/2011 7:53:00 PM

This one made me laugh. Thanks so much Carol.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/6/2011 9:50:00 AM

Is there room for two in your padded cell, Carol. My hair is "poofy" today too and I always feel a bit goofy. Delightful entry for Francine's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn