Smile In a Dream

I had a dream

a prince of love
accompanied me 
walked around the palace of love

I smiled in my dream
when the prince
looked at me as he explained
the journey

in the palace of love
everything was
exquisite

I was welcomed
by the lovely ladies of the palace 
with beautiful bouquets

we walked hand in hand
he gripped and hugged me
explored the garden of love
stunning beauty

his palms
were so warm
i felt his
reassuring hugs

his handsome stare
was so nice and affectionate
soothed my soul

but
it was a dream

how to fly to
the palace of love
my dreams went away
and left my prince of love
alone ...
in the palace of love

Minds and imaginations
Are so remarkable
When the dreams lived
in my mind
Everything became so real

I miss his warm hugs
I miss his handsome stare
I miss his smiles

and I long for
a smile in a dream

~ (c) Sukmawati Komala ~
05 June 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/15/2013 9:11:00 PM
such pretty words, love it ;} hugs for you and thank you for reading my Cotton Candy On A Windy Day"
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