Vijay Pandit Poet Quintain (English)

Smile If You Have a Winning Hand

Life can mimic a game of chance
It can be grand or awfully bland
Take your stance with a joyful glance
Go ahead and reveal your plans
Smile if you have a winning hand.


August 16, 2017

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Joseph May January 22, 2024 at 1:24 PM Very nicely penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read

Valsa George October 19, 2022 at 6:42 AM A little gem of a poem. Yes, life can be grand or awfully bland. Whatever it be - have a joyful stance. Our attitude is more important!

K.R. Wonder August 4, 2022 at 5:52 PM Excellent, I love the upbeat rhythm and flow you have going on, and the message you shared. Thanks for sharing this!

Probir Gupta August 19, 2017 at 5:20 AM Lovely and inspiring Quintain ... Thank you for liking my 'so many days you and I did sit here' ... Vijay Pandit August 19, 2017 at 5:59 AM Thanks Probir!

James Swartz August 18, 2017 at 5:26 PM I Love this one Vijay! A joy and so fun to read. You should smile with your winning hand because of this piece. Vijay Pandit August 18, 2017 at 5:39 PM Love your comments--thanks James.

Susan Ashley August 17, 2017 at 8:43 PM Hi Vijay, I love your poem with great rhyme and flow. I love the line 'Take your stance with a joyful glance'... Wonderfully worded; life is what we make it! I smiled for your winning poem :) Vijay Pandit August 17, 2017 at 9:23 PM Such wonderful feedback from you.. so happy. Thanks Susan!

Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2017 at 4:11 PM Very cute! Like ita, Vijay Pandit August 17, 2017 at 4:17 PM Thanks Kim!

Akkina Downing August 17, 2017 at 7:25 AM Ha, you just got me smile this morning :) thanks for the smile Vijay :) Vijay Pandit August 17, 2017 at 11:16 AM Smile always feels good--thanks Akkina!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 6:30 AM - Thank you, I needed a smile today Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit August 17, 2017 at 6:55 AM My turn--you always bring smile to everyone, Anne-Lise!

Heidi Sands August 16, 2017 at 8:30 AM I am smiling with you reading this Vijay! I love it :) Vijay Pandit August 16, 2017 at 8:39 AM Love you feedback, always! Thanks for the smile!!

Jan Allison August 16, 2017 at 6:14 AM You made me smile Vijay but sometimes it is good not to reveal your cards all at once!:-) hugs jan xx Vijay Pandit August 16, 2017 at 7:02 AM True. A smile is a beautiful sight--many thanks for your feedback, Jan.

Tim Smith August 16, 2017 at 5:57 AM I'll be smiling with you Vijay Pandit August 16, 2017 at 7:00 AM Love a smile any time! Thanks Tim.

Russell Sivey August 16, 2017 at 5:52 AM This is a brilliant write my friend! I really loved how you put this one together, a fabulous poem! I believe that your poem is outstanding, and is very wondrous, one of the best I've read all morning! Such a stupendous piece, Great Work!! Vijay Pandit August 16, 2017 at 6:58 AM You always bring me smile, dear Russell. Thank you for your lovely visit this morning.

Lin Lane August 16, 2017 at 5:51 AM Well written, Vijay, but sometimes it pays to keep a poker face. I'm smiling. Vijay Pandit August 16, 2017 at 6:57 AM Delighted by your visit Lin. Love your feedback. Thank you.