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Smile If You Have a Winning Hand

Life can mimic a game of chance It can be grand or awfully bland Take your stance with a joyful glance Go ahead and reveal your plans Smile if you have a winning hand. August 16, 2017

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Date: 1/22/2024 1:24:00 PM
Very nicely penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 10/19/2022 6:42:00 AM
A little gem of a poem. Yes, life can be grand or awfully bland. Whatever it be - have a joyful stance. Our attitude is more important!
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Date: 8/4/2022 5:52:00 PM
Excellent, I love the upbeat rhythm and flow you have going on, and the message you shared. Thanks for sharing this!
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Date: 8/19/2017 5:20:00 AM
Lovely and inspiring Quintain ... Thank you for liking my 'so many days you and I did sit here' ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 5:59:00 AM
Thanks Probir!
Date: 8/18/2017 5:26:00 PM
I Love this one Vijay! A joy and so fun to read. You should smile with your winning hand because of this piece.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/18/2017 5:39:00 PM
Love your comments--thanks James.
Date: 8/17/2017 8:43:00 PM
Hi Vijay, I love your poem with great rhyme and flow. I love the line 'Take your stance with a joyful glance'... Wonderfully worded; life is what we make it! I smiled for your winning poem :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2017 9:23:00 PM
Such wonderful feedback from you.. so happy. Thanks Susan!
Date: 8/17/2017 4:11:00 PM
Very cute! Like ita,
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 8/17/2017 7:25:00 AM
Ha, you just got me smile this morning :) thanks for the smile Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2017 11:16:00 AM
Smile always feels good--thanks Akkina!
Date: 8/17/2017 6:30:00 AM
- Thank you, I needed a smile today Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2017 6:55:00 AM
My turn--you always bring smile to everyone, Anne-Lise!
Date: 8/16/2017 8:30:00 AM
I am smiling with you reading this Vijay! I love it :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/16/2017 8:39:00 AM
Love you feedback, always! Thanks for the smile!!
Date: 8/16/2017 6:14:00 AM
You made me smile Vijay but sometimes it is good not to reveal your cards all at once!:-) hugs jan xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/16/2017 7:02:00 AM
True. A smile is a beautiful sight--many thanks for your feedback, Jan.
Date: 8/16/2017 5:57:00 AM
I'll be smiling with you
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/16/2017 7:00:00 AM
Love a smile any time! Thanks Tim.
Date: 8/16/2017 5:52:00 AM
This is a brilliant write my friend! I really loved how you put this one together, a fabulous poem! I believe that your poem is outstanding, and is very wondrous, one of the best I've read all morning! Such a stupendous piece, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/16/2017 6:58:00 AM
You always bring me smile, dear Russell. Thank you for your lovely visit this morning.
Date: 8/16/2017 5:51:00 AM
Well written, Vijay, but sometimes it pays to keep a poker face. I'm smiling.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/16/2017 6:57:00 AM
Delighted by your visit Lin. Love your feedback. Thank you.

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